is this the correct way for laying out a chacter talking to a specifc other chacter?
BOB, BILL & SAM ARE IN A ROOM
BOB
(to Sam)
You are an idiot.
In other words, I put it where i would normally put descriptive terms (like "loudly, sarcastic, etc")
Simple script formatting question
Quote: Pete @ November 29 2008, 1:39 PM GMTis this the correct way for laying out a chacter talking to a specifc other chacter?
BOB, BILL & SAM ARE IN A ROOM
BOB
(to Sam)
You are an idiot.In other words, I put it where i would normally put descriptive terms (like "loudly, sarcastic, etc")
I'd do it this way.
1. INT. ROOM. DAY / NIGHT.
BOB, BILL AND SAM ARE PRESENT.
BOB: (TO SAM)
You are an idiot
cool...thats what i did (your example was a better example of what i did than the example i did!)
what about where it changes mid sentance:
MARK:
I like you. (to Bob) But i dont like you.
Is that right?
Quote: Pete @ November 29 2008, 2:18 PM GMTwhat about where it changes mid sentance:
MARK:
I like you. (to Bob) But i dont like you.Is that right?
If it's clear, it's fine.
as the urologist said to the Bishop