Are We There Yet?

INT. CAR, DAY

CLOSE on a young BOY, about eight, playing idly with a some kind of electronic gizmo.

BOY (bored)

Are we there yet?

DAD'S VOICE (off camera)

No.

BOY

Are we there yet?

DAD'S VOICE

No.

BOY

Are we there yet?

DAD'S VOICE

No!

[short pause]

BOY

Are we there yet?

DAD'S VOICE

No.

BOY

Are we there yet?

DAD'S VOICE

No.

BOY

Are we there yet?

DAD'S VOICE

We'll be there when we get there!

CUT TO:

They're in a hearse, driving slowly down a residential street. A flower arrangement in the back window reads "GOODBYE MUM"

Hello Kevin.

Lovely could picture a line, about ask your mum.

Like it.

Great start Kevin.

Thanks chaps :-)

Ive written a similar scene in my sitcom. Where we flashback to Princess Diana's funeral where two of my character have been entrusted to deliver the coffin to the church. We then see various shots of them giving her coffin (With her inside it) one last good time before it is buried. They drive the hearse through a McDonalds drive-thru, take it on a rollar coaster etc... And also (A line my partner has just reminded me that he wrote), as they are driving, one shouts to the coffin "You be quiet back there Your Highness or I'm turning this hearse around" then laughs with his friend.

All in all quite a good sketch. Always nice to have a bit of dark humour in a sketch show

I liked that, well done!

Very nice. In with a flourish, Kevin!