Smoke Damage

INT. HOUSE.

GRAMS: OMINOUS MUSIC.

VIEW FROM INSIDE OF FIREMAN'S OXEGEN MASK AS HE WALKS SLOWLY THROUGH SMOKE DAMAGED HOUSE.

SFX HEAVY BREATHING THROUGH MASK.

HAND-WRITTEN ON CHARCOAL COVERED WALLS OF HOUSE.

‘GETTING WARM.'

‘GETTING WARMER.'

‘GETTING COOLER.'

MUFFLED VOICE: Bugger.

VIEW CHANGES DIRECTION.

‘GETTING WARM AGAIN.'

WRITTEN ON DOOR ‘ROASTING'.

FIREMAN OPENS DOOR.

CUT TO WOMAN LYING ON BED.

WOMAN: I think we're taking these role playing games a bit too far dear.

ENDS.

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