Take a puff and threaten to breath on them if they don't hand over the dosh.
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I genuinely dislike smoking, but it annoys the people I work for and means I don't get called in for meetings and other trite. As soon as I go, the smoking stops.
Yesterday I stopped smoking. Twenty-four times.
I loved it...everyone should have someone like you around for sunday afternoon BBQ's you seem to hold court and are very observant...most of my mates here just talk about their neighbours...maybe you could come around here...i'll give you a mic and we'll just drink stella's and be entertained...well done...can we have more of your rants...maybe a sunday special.
This is excellent writing. I'd love to see it. It would work extremely well if your on stage persona and appearance matches the content
Fred! Hows things going with your
'Worth More Dead'
I liked that very much. Are you hiding hundreds & thousands in your bank account?
Edited coz I left out the D in hunreds, ooooops look I did it again.
dddddddddddd, well the button works. Must be my brain.
Quote: Michael Monkhouse @ June 17, 2007, 2:07 PMYesterday I stopped smoking. Twenty-four times.
Thanks for asking Chaley! I paid £60 for some very helpful feedback from that Marc Blake. I’ve since gone through a few redrafts but not that many ‘cos I’ve been busy with this and that. I’m submitting a 15 minute version of it to some theatre project associated with the Canal Café then it’s submission and rejection time! Sadly no hidden wads yet!
I've just popped back here and am very grateful for your comments and encouragement. Cheers!
Quote: ajp29 @ June 16, 2007, 2:23 PMThanks Paul, I haven't tested that bit out loud because I haven't done a slot which is big enough, easy Charley. But I really want to try out the stuff that I've written, i've got about twenty minutes, in a ten minute slot.
Lucky for some I'm having trouble booking a gig I have a brand spanking new (good) routine... I've been offered the 22nd of october, lucky me!
And good luck with it dude.
Quote: paul watson @ June 19, 2007, 11:08 AMLucky for some I'm having trouble booking a gig I have a brand spanking new (good) routine... I've been offered the 22nd of october, lucky me!
And good luck with it dude.
Best of luck!