INT. HOME.
A PHONE RINGS, A MAN ANSWERS IT.
MAN: Hello.
VOICE: Your wife's five foot two.
PHONELINE GOES DEAD.
MAN: What the f**k?
WIFE: Who was that dear?
MAN: Bloody strange who ever he was. Some bloke said that you're five feet two then hung up.
WOMAN: But i'm five foot three.
MAN: Phew, that was a close call.
*groan*
I liked it, I imagined the last last delivered in extreme close-up with the guy looking directly at the camera.
It is quick, but I'm not sure it's a gag
On reflection, its pretty poor actually but some you win, some you lose.
It's a good idea, but I think you undersell the punch.
Maybe sinister music, close up husbands face filled with fury.
"You lied to me!"
Quote: Nigel Kelly @ September 10 2008, 1:05 PM BSTOn reflection, its pretty poor actually but some you win, some you lose.
You say this when you look in the mirror?
Quote: Morrace @ September 10 2008, 3:37 PM BSTYou say this when you look in the mirror?
No, I say '2IHT' when I look in the mirror.
Quote: Sofa_Matt @ September 10 2008, 12:36 PM BSTIt is quick, but I'm not sure it's a gag
Perhaps not but it's scores highly on the groan factor for me.
Quote: Nigel Kelly @ September 10 2008, 3:46 PM BSTNo, I say '2IHT' when I look in the mirror.
