Sitcom Trial Script Page 4

Quote: bushbaby @ September 7 2008, 2:39 PM BST

It's years ago now, I have a black brother-in-law who lives in the carib and I don't know how the conversation kicked up now but I do know he came over and a couple of friends visited my mother. The 'ten' of course was her exaggeration.

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She was probably an Agatha Christie fan.

and then there was one

Having gone over the original script of "Jobsworths" there are some similarities in this sitcom, the only thing missing in "rules is rules" is the humour, so Sal, Nia, Jess and myself can all sleep easy.

Quote: Ray Dawson @ September 7 2008, 8:11 PM BST

Having gone over the original script of "Jobsworths" there are some similarities in this sitcom, the only thing missing in "rules is rules" is the humour, so Sal, Nia, Jess and myself can all sleep easy.

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Good, I'm so pleased Ray, I'm sure you will be happy that every word of dialogue in the above is mine.
Ideas aren't copyright.

Well let me know if i can help you with anymore, how about a cafe?

Oops! Silly me, almost forgot the cafe was another of Sal's ideas.

Quote: Ray Dawson @ September 7 2008, 8:14 PM BST

Well let me know if i can help you with anymore, how about a cafe?

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I don't think any of it is going anywhere but one likes to keep busy.
Yes you can help me with anything, cafe or whatever

You're right, as a sitcom, it's going nowhere.

Oops! Silly me, almost forgot the cafe was another of Sal's ideas. ###

yes I already said so further up.

Quote: Ray Dawson @ September 7 2008, 8:11 PM BST

Having gone over the original script of "Jobsworths" there are some similarities in this sitcom, the only thing missing in "rules is rules" is the humour.

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Thanks

Well you know me Juggs, always speak the truth

you've heard the song #That's what Friends Are For#

You laying claim to that as well???

Quote: Ray Dawson @ September 7 2008, 9:49 PM BST

You laying claim to that as well???

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Get something straight Ray before I lose my temper.
Ideas aren't copyright.
The script above is all my own work.
Sal came up with a good idea for a sitcom which we all contributed to. The scenes above were mine that I contributed.
Sal's were all location scenes.
I was trying to bring it around to a studio sitcom as you well know.
You sound so bitter, get over it and move on.
There are no new ideas under the sun.
Write it yourself, there are no restrictions and with your point of view, you'd be far, far more funny than myself who apparently isn't humourous at all.