Flaner
Thursday 28th August 2008 10:04pm
Manchester
287 posts
Quote: David Bussell @ August 28 2008, 6:59 PM BST
It was well performed and there were some good gags in there.
It could have moved quicker though (you really tested the patience with the hold music) and it didn't end on much of a high. If I spend five minutes with the guy I at least want to know whether he got the job or not!
And you could have spiced things up by changing the slides every once in a while. There's a whole new layer of comedy you're not exploiting there.
Yeah, youtube cut off the last 10 seconds! All you hear is a ringtone, and the interviewer saying '....Mr Jones?'
To be honest, i only did it because i saw a setting on audition that said 'telephone frequency'. I should, in retrospect, have expanded the idea.