Very good you have the two characters very much on the nail.
Could maybe be a little trimmed.
Otherwise top stuff.
Very good you have the two characters very much on the nail.
Could maybe be a little trimmed.
Otherwise top stuff.
Once this sketch got going I was laughing till the end. Very good indeed. Very Pythonesque as has been said.
Thanks chaps. You've lifted me out of a glum evening.
Quote: swerytd @ August 21 2008, 4:02 PM BST
Also, your final line is funny and punchy and ends the sketch well, but it might be better if you use an animal that people already sympathise a lot with (panda/koala/kitten) to make his follow-up even more inappropriate.
"The Rape of Julian Sparrow" - any better?
Quote: Tommy Power @ August 22 2008, 2:54 PM BST"The Rape of Julian Sparrow" - any better?
You want an animal that isn't an actual surname, so something ridiculous like a baboon or a wallaby.