Town heads..Meet the girlfriend. Page 2

Quote: Alan Alexander @ June 1, 2007, 5:51 PM

I have no idea what you are talking about.
Yours were the first two pieces I read. I genuinely am trying to offer some constructive criticism. There is nothing personal or underhand going on.
I am sorry I found your efforts to be poor, but please don't convince yourself that there is any vendetta or that I am masquerading as someone else.
Feel free to ignore my comments. It may be that you are a great writer and I am hopelessly wrong.
I do, however, seriously doubt this.
Best Wishes

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You realise you are criticising the future of Sitcom. Charley is our star in the making.

Awwwwwwwww! Its nice to be loved. David I will pay you later for that post. Is it okay in twenty's. LOL

No - I prefer fifties.

Ok. Fifties it is. All brand new and crisp. Straight out of the pocket from this guy, who knows a guy down the pub.xx

Quote: David Chapman @ June 1, 2007, 7:29 PM

Charley is our star in the making.

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She'll be all over the "results of syphillis" warning TV ads in a few years.

Charley's right. You've said what you think about her stuff - and Johnny D. There is loads more stuff if you want to be really constructive.

The only thing is we still don't know who you are or what you've done.
If for instance I heard that you'd been involved with somethjing like Absolutely then I might be interested in your opinions. Until you tell us otherwise your opinions are about as valid as mine.

"Thanks for the material, guys."

What exactly is that supposed to me Alan?

David!

*says in a warning tone*

Quote: David Chapman @ June 2, 2007, 1:00 AM

"Thanks for the material, guys."

What exactly is that supposed to me Alan?

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Hey let's all calm down... I took it to mean we've given him some ideas based on people who write on forums back-and-forth, NOT that he's into nicking ideas from scripts/sketches etc that he didn't like.

Have a sandwich.

Either he is one clever bugger or was at his pc. The Merriam-Webster online Thesaurus site open.
Fair play he hated my little sketches but boy could he drone on & on.
Maybe my picture reminded him of his mummy. (A much younger version if you please) Mummy is currently in the attic. I think his real name is Norman.

Thats a cracking pic Aaron. Is that your puddy kitten.

*strongly warning tone* Charley.

Okay I am zipped up like a sleeping bag.
Is that your buba cat?

No, mine's black.

And actually WOULD have eaten the stir fry. (Probably.)