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THE ALL NEW BSG COMEDY COMPETITION - 30/5

THE ALL NEW BSG COMEDY COMPETITION - 30/5

Welcome to the all new sketch competition with your host for the last time, for a while at least, Leevil!

Next week your new host will be David Chapman!

Let me reveal this weeks winner(s), drum roll...

WINNERS: charley rance & David Chapman!!

Points - Name
03 - charley rance
03 - David Chapman
01 - swerytd
01 - Boits

This weeks Comp:

To enter - You must produce an original sketch, gag, lyric, image. But no audio or video for now.

Post it here. At the end of the comp, it will be put to public vote.

1 vote will earn you 1 point.

You may only submit one entry a week, but it can be edited as many times as you want up until the closing date.

THIS WEEKS TOPIC: - Computers (Chosen by losaavedra)

COMPETITION CLOSES: Wednesday 6th June 2007

CURRENT OVERALL LEADER BOARD:

Points - Name
09 - ajp29
09 - ShoePie
08 - Leevil
08 - David Chapman
08 - Charley Rance
07 - Swerytd
04 - Andy W
03 - Stylo
03 - losaavedra
02 - Imamazed
02 - Slack Bladder
02 - Paul Nash
01 - Boits
01 - Ginger Jesus
01 - Nick Rivers
01 - Daddy Maz

Goodbye & Good luck!

SCENE: INT: SOMEONE'S HOME.

SOME GUY OPENS UP A BRAND NEW COMPUTER SYSTEM, SETS IT UP, AND PLUGS IT IN.

HE THEN GOES ON-LINE, LOGS ONTO THE PC WORLD WEBSITE, AND BUYS THE NEWEST COMPUTER, WITH ALL THE LATEST TECHNOLOGY.

Everyone else needn't try. Greggles is the winner. Surely? An almost perfect quickie.

EDIT: Oops - sorry, I forgot this thread is just for entries, not comment. So ignore what I said just then.

INT. OFFICE - DAY

BOB SITS AT HIS COMPUTER AS AN ERROR MESSAGE POPS UP ON SCREEN FOR THE 20TH TIME.

BOB
(Suppressing rage, through gritted teeth)
OK, this is fun, I'm glad you're doing this, it's really testing my patients to the limit. Thank you for testing me, if I'm ever in a situation like this again I know how far I can be pushed.

HE CLICKS THE 'OK' BUTTON AND TRIES TO EXECUTE THE PROGRAM AGAIN AND AGAIN THE ERROR MESSAGE POPS UP.

BOB
Oh boy, you really know how to do it don't you, you really know how to push my buttons, when I obviously don't know how to push yours?

BOB STANDS UP AND LIFTS HIS "STRESS RELIEVING" PLANT POT ABOVE HIS HEAD, PREPARING TO THROW IT THREW THE MONITORS SCREEN.

BOB
(Screaming)
See how you like this error.

MARKUS WALKS PAST AND STOPS BOB.

MARKUS
(smooth talker)
Hey Bob, having a little computer trouble there buddy?

BOB
No, just err giving my plant some extra light?

MARKUS LAUGHS AND WALKS OVER TO BOB'S COMPUTER AND TAPS AWAY AT THE KEYBOARD. BOB MIMES HITTING HIM WITH THE PLANT POT.

MARKUS
There you go buddy.

THE ERROR DISAPPEARS.

BOB
Thanks.

MARKUS
It's all about pressing the right buttons. I could do the same for your wife.

BOB
(Screaming)
Error.

BOB HITS MARKUS OVER THE HEAD WITH THE PLANT POT AND DUSTS HIS HANDS OFF. HE SMILES AND SITS DOWN AT HIS COMPUTER AND CLICKS ON HIS MOUSE.

SOUND EFFECTS: THE COMPUTER BEEPS IN ERROR.

BOB
(Screaming)
Arghhhhh!

END

Another one from the archive, written during the final days of 1999. It needs to be read in the context of all the ‘Year 2000’ scare mongering that was going on at the time. In a further 93 years it will maybe become topical again … although computers should’ve moved on a bit by then … and probably even sprouted legs! Anyway, the following can either be presented as a poem (Pam Ayres accent!) or sung … in which case it goes to the tune of the Eton Boating Song. Sorry it’s so long but I got carried away (it’s sort-of biographical) … and even more cheekily I got to choose the subject this week!

Pooter 2K Last Minute Blues

It was Year 2K Eve in the workhouse
the pooters were all hushed and still
no lights were a-blinking (nor printers a-printing)
and thus it continued, until ...
in the BIOS the time ticked past midnight
the pooters did stretch and did yawn
but a glance at the clock delivered a shock
'cos they saw they had not yet been born.

The pooters did get in a quandary
wondering just who they should tell
It didn't seem right, that a very short night,
should have lost them a century as well.
But one of them had an idea
to ring, via his modem, for aid
"I'll just have a chat with that programmer chap ...
... and a fix then will surely be made".

The 'phone took a long while to answer
but then came a voice that they knew
"the problem ain't mine" said the chap on the line
"the man that you want is called Stu ...
... he wrote all of the systems you're running
... before leaving the company last year
... I do know of course, that we don't have the source
... so the problem ain't simple I fear".

The pooters rang Stu shortly after
and had a most interesting chat -
most of the programs were done in the sixties
and seventies (or something like that).
"The language was COBOL" he told them,
"the source was just cards punched with holes ...
... in '80 we binned 'em (no reader to read 'em!)
... and lots of us took on new roles".

"In '90 we made some new systems ...
... and mostly we wrote them in C
... but the budget was axed, some programmers sacked
... and the management blamed it on me."
"I said that there might be an answer ...
... new systems and savings of cash;
... just make the new C call old COBOL
... and we'd have the 'new' code in a flash!"

"Well it worked and the management smiled ...
... (like they do when they're not spending money)
... I told them the risk but the point was, well, 'missed'
... and my caution was looked on as ‘funny’".
"They said that the problem I'd mentioned
... was not worth discussion or fuss
... and pooter advances would re-duce the chances
... of small interruptions to us".

" The next thing they wanted was GUI
... ‘make boring old screens go away
... with menus and icons (and go-faster stripes) on
... the systems we're running today'".
"so we made a new layer with windows
... on code we'd been running before
... and with a mouse click the users could pick
... any feature they wanted and more".

" For a couple of years it was quiet ...
... with nothing to do but maintain
... this great heap of code, most of it old
... (how I wished we could just start again!)".
" Then they said we should introduce 'objects' ...
... for code to be shared without fuss
... so we got us some books and read about OOPS
... and stirred in some C with plus plus".

" Last year my part in this saga ...
... did thankfully come to an end
... 'you're too old Mr Stu, we can't afford you
... with the young-uns on which we depend'"
" They gave me what's known as 'the handshake' ...
... and said I should leave that same day
... I didn't protest, just cleared out my desk
... and collected my severance pay".

"So like many who find themselves jobless ...
... I studied the ads through and through
... most jobs I applied for - got no reply, or
... they said 'don't call us we'll call you'".
"But one day, things changed, for the better ...
... the job called for age over youth
... I wrote, they accepted (quite unexpected)
... but then I am long in the tooth".

"Their worry was that of 'two thousand' ...
... that systems would grind to a halt
... 'we just cannot wait, until its too late,
... your job is to find every fault'".
"Today they are pleased with the progress ...
... my job gets respect and no stress
... but one is enough and although it sounds tough
... you'll have to sort out your own mess!"

The pooters, dismayed by Stu's story,
were filled with a most awesome fear;
No fix would be found (and systems made sound)
when the work should've started last year.
With nobody there to help them
they made up their minds what to do ...
pretend nothing's wrong and just carry on
(the problem might go away too!).

By the end of next day in the workhouse
some very strange things had occurred.
All debts had been cleared (the customers cheered)
and cash to suppliers deferred.
The management, while a bit puzzled,
were pleased at the uplift in trade
but hopes were soon dashed, the company crashed,
with everything lost it'd made.

The assets were sold in an auction
the pooters soon had a new site
a man they all knew, his name 'Mr Stu'
soon put all their programs to right.
The troubles they'd had were not serious
and really quite easy to fix ...
a few lines of code to replace the old
he'd written in seventy six!

If this tale has a moral dimension
by now it will be rather plain
there's a use for old dogs, in programming jobs,
and chucking them out is a shame.
The ones that can save your Millenium
need to know a few tricks to be sure
they're long in the horn and mostly were born
just after the Second World War.

Few of your corporate systems
are really as 'new' as they look
the stuff on the screen conceals all that's been
no clue about how long it took.
So if you are using computers
there's only one thing left to say
2K compliance is key for reliance
on programs you're running today.

© 1999 Mike Corke, Rojales, Alicante, Spain

WoW!! Thats some talent for poems you have there Losaavedra.

EPISODE 2 - OLD MAN SAM'S COMPUTER PROBLEM

SCENE.INT.SAMS HOUSE.DAY

JIMMY RECIEVED AN URGENT CALL FROM SAM AND COMES BURSTING THROUGH THE FRONT DOOR OF SAMS HOUSE

JIMMY:
What is it old man Sam?

OLD MAN SAM:
It's this blasted computer Jimmy, I can't seem to get it to work.

JIMMY LOOKS ANNOYINGLY AT SAM

JIMMY:
A computer! You don't even have any electricity in the house you

annoying old bastard.

OLD MAN SAM:
(SURPRISED)What, you need electricity to use a computer, oh darn it!.

How am I supposed to watch bestiality now Jimmy.

JIMMY:
Why you dirty old bastard, first you mow hundreds of innocent animals

down, and now you wanna see people doing dirty things to them!

OLD MAN SAM:
You mowed them down too Jimmy.

JIMMY:
Yeah but I didn't wanna make sweet love to them afterwards.

JIMMY SMASHES THE PC MONITOR ON TO SAMS HEAD

JIMMY:
(SMILING) Well Sam, you did always want to be on TV.

JIMMY AND SAM START LAUGHING FOR ABOUT 10 SECONDS.

OLD MAN SAM:
What do you wanna do now Jimmy?

JIMMY:
Well Sam, there's only one thing we can do.

JIMMY KICKS SAM IN THE NUTS AND RUNS OFF LAUGHING

JIMMY:
Eat my dust you senial old twat! (LOUD LAUGHING)

END TITLE MUSIC STARTS WITH SAM STILL HOLDING HIS CROTCH ON THE FLOOR.

"It's Jimmy and Sam,
Jimmy and Sam,
Jimmy and Sam the senial...man"

END

Quote: Greggles @ May 31, 2007, 1:16 AM

SCENE: INT: SOMEONE'S HOME.

SOME GUY OPENS UP A BRAND NEW COMPUTER SYSTEM, SETS IT UP, AND PLUGS IT IN.

HE THEN GOES ON-LINE, LOGS ONTO THE PC WORLD WEBSITE, AND BUYS THE NEWEST COMPUTER, WITH ALL THE LATEST TECHNOLOGY.

I don't think I can compete with this. But I'd already written one...

SOMETHING FOR THE WEEKEND

A chemist’s.
A TEENAGER creeps in shyly and wanders up to the attractive female ASSISTANT.

TEENAGER Hello I’d like a packet of c-c-c-computers please.

ASSISTANT (laughs) Don’t be bashful. Just say what you want.

TEENAGER Packet of three. Three c-c-c-computers.

ASSISTANT (laughs)

TEENAGER Big black shiny reloadable c-c-c-computers.

ASSISTANT (laughs) You teenagers are all the same. You come in here trying to be all proud and cocksure…

Teenager jumps.

ASSISTANT Then you get nervous. Just ask away. We’ve got all sorts here, look: ribbed ones, pierced ones, buffalo-shaped ones…

TEENAGER No really. I just want three...

ASSISTANT Petite, majestic, equine…

TEENAGER You don’t understand. I just…

ASSISTANT Edible, luminous – her face’ll light up when she sees that – ones that come in different colours ’cause you can’t…

TEENAGER For the last time you silly bitch. Just give me my f**king computers.

ASSISTANT Yes Sir. Sorry Sir.

She reaches under the counter, pulls out three computers for him.

TEENAGER Thank you.

He pays, turns away; then turns back and snatches a packet of condoms from the display and puts them on the counter.

The Googler in: 'Why Pay Salary'
================================

INT. OFFICE. PM.

TOM THE MANAGER APPROACHES BOB, WHO IS TAPPING ON HIS KEYBOARD.

TOM
Bob, can you backup the database, import the reports into Access and write a macro so it automatically imports in into an Excel spreadsheet?

BOB
That'll take a while, Tom.

TOM
I checked on Google and it really doesn't look so difficult.

BOB
Tom, everything you ask me to do you check on Google first.

TOM
Google said it takes about five minutes.

BOB (SARCASTIC)
(SARCASTIC) Well, if Google says it must be true! Google this! Google that!

TOM
I'll take that as a 'yes' then.

BOB
Tell me Tom, what's the point paying me so much money for my technical skills?

UNCOMFORTABLE SILENCE

BOB
Tom?

MORE SILENCE

TOM
I'll... I'll just go check on Google, shall I?

BOB SIGHS AND STARTS TAPPING ON HIS KEYBOARD AGAIN AS TOM LEAVES

END

Bump - so I can give it some thought........

OPERATOR
Hello caller my name is Berney, I am your friendly PC Universe customer service agent & I….

CALLER
Yes I need some help please

OPERATOR
(tsk) As I was saying, I am your friendly customer service agent & I……..

CALLER
Yes sorry I am in a hurry I have to go back to work in 10 minutes. I brought this computer from you 2 weeks ago…..

OPERATOR
(Sighs) Look Madam I can’t go any further with this until I have given my PC Universe pitch okay.

CALLER
(Sharp intake of breath) Okay but I really am in a rush.

OPERATOR
Right, as I was trying so hard to tell you, I am your friendly PC Universe customer service agent & I am here to help you with any queries you may have.

CALLER
Is that it, can I tell you my problem now?

OPERATOR
Is it a query?

CALLER
Well yes! I purchased this computer from you 2 weeks ago & I believe it to be faulty. It has this green line running down the centre of it.

OPERATOR
Did Madam spill any peas down the screen, if so it is not the computers faulty. (Busts out laughing)

CALLER
No I did not.

OPERATOR
Was the green line apparent on the day of purchase?

CALLER
No It became apparent 2 weeks later.

OPERATOR
Does madam have poor eyesight?

CALLER
What’s that got to do with it?

OPERATOR
Well, some people with dodgy eyes see spots, some see lines, off all colours including green.

CALLER
I wear glasses but……..

OPERATOR
Ahhhhhh!

CALLER
Ahhhhhhh!?????

OPERATOR
YES! Ahhhhhhh! Are the frames to those glasses green?

CALLER
Yes but……….

OPERATOR
Well maybe madam is squinting towards the edge of one eyeball, catching a glimpse of her frames, causing the eye to see a green line on the monitor.

CALLER
No Madam is not. Madam is seeing a real green line running down the centre of the screen & Madam would like her 2-week-old PC looked at ASAP please.

OPERATOR
Oooooooooooooooh! Well I can get a technician out to you but I must warn Madam that should he find no manufacturer fault Madam will be charged for his services.

CALLER
Fine. When is the next available appointment?

OPERATOR
Let me see, please hold the line…….Are you still holding the line Madam?

CALLER
Yes

OPERATOR
Good. please hold……..Is Madam still holding?

CALLER
YES!

OPERATOR
Excellent! Please continue to hold…… Is Madam still?.....

CALLER
Look I am late,very late. Just tell me when the next free appointment is. Pllllllllllease.

OPERATOR
You realise you are still on the line to PC Universe Madam. Not a pregnancy advisory clinic.

CALLER
Grrrrrrrrr!

OPERATOR
Right Madam, STAY CALM. THINK OF THE BABY. I have an appointment for you. A techie will be with you on Monday at 2pm.

CALLER
Fine that’s only 3 days away.

OPERATOR
Monday August the 14th at 2pm.(pff)(stops himself from busting out laughing)

CALLER
What!!

OPERATOR
Sorry does madam have bad hearing too? (Shouts) I SAID MONDAY

CALLER
I heard. This is ridiculous. I am as well taking it back to the shop myself.

OPERATOR
You do that Madam.

CALLER
I will

OPERATOR
Good! Madam could always hop on the green line (busts out laughing)

CALLER
Fine

OPERATOR
Dandy 'o'

CALLER
Tosser

OPERATOR
Beg Pardon?

CALLER
Sorry I sneezed

OPERATOR
Preggy Bitch

CALLER
WHAT????

OPERATOR
Sorry I must have caught your cold, I sneezed. Now Is there any other queries I can help you with Madam. We have done your PC, Eyesight, hearing, PREGNANCY SCARE and influenza.

CALLER
I am going to make a complaint.

OPERATOR
Good for you Madam. Try using plasticine. Very therapeutic.

INT. CLOSE UP OF MIDDLE-AGED MAN’S FACE WITH COMPUTER IN SHOT

MAN:
(CLICKING + TYPING) Well let’s see here … hmmm … oh yes … (LICKING HIS LIPS) this looks like a good one. Horny house-maids dot com. (EYES WIDEN) Oh, look at you. Now that’s good. (PUTS HEAD TO THE SIDE TO HAVE A GOOD LOOK) Oh yes, oh yes, oh yes.

A KNOCKING SOUND IS HEARD.

ZOOM OUT TO INT. WAITING ROOM.

PATIENT:
Excuse me I have a doctors appointment. Mrs Andrews?

MAN:
(LOOKING AROUND DESK) Oh yes, please take a seat.

PATIENT TAKES A SEAT

MAN:
(LOOKING BACK AT COMPUTER) Oh yes …

100 years ago

A professor and his assistant stand before the first computer ever built. It is massive and cumbersome. It must be 60ft high and 30ft across.

PROF: Well my old friend we've finally done it. After 25 years of trying we have made the most important technological breakthrough of recent times.

ASST: It's amazing! I can't believe you've done it professor. All that blood, sweat and tears have finally come to fruition.

PROF: With the invention of this 'computer' we shall be able to calculate things that a million different minds couldn't come close to.

ASST: What do you think this means for the world professor?

PROF: Who knows. It may bring people together, bring the world closer together. In years to come maybe someone in England can talk to someone else situated on the other side of the world from the comfort of his own living room.

ASST: Never!

PROF: It may even appear as some kind of super villain in a Superman movie...probably one where they can't think of any actual villains for superman to take on...that'll discount the first couple so it'll probably be the 3rd one, yes they're usually the weakest.

ASST: Are we all set sir?

PROF: Indeed we are my old friend. Switch it on.

THE ASSISTANT SWITCHES ON THIS HUGE PIECE OF MACHINERY. THE NOISE IS UNBEARABLE, VERY LOUD. LIGHTS ARE FLASHING AND THE MACHINE IS SHAKING VIOLENTLY.

PROF: It's working...it's alive.

THE COMPUTER CONTINUES TO SHAKE, COUGH AND SPLUTTER. SLOWLY THE MACHINE GRINDS TO A HALT. SUDDENLY, OUT OF A SMALL HATCH AT THE BOTTOM SOMETHING DROPS. THE PROFESSOR PICKS IT UP,,,IT IS A MINT CHOC CHIP CORNETTO. THE MEN JUST STARE AT THE ICE CREAM.

ASST: Is that it? That's the sum total of years of hard work? It's pathetic.

PROF: I know...I wanted a Toffee Crisp.

END

Right - looks like that's it closed.

(Oi - you didn't give me a chance. I haven't entered this week.)

It's your own fault - you've had enough time.

Sorry about that - attack of schizophrenia.

Anyway vote here for your favourite. Voting closes Sunday 10th @ 10pm.

CURRENT OVERALL LEADER BOARD:

Points - Name
09 - ajp29
09 - ShoePie
08 - Leevil
08 - David Chapman
08 - Charley Rance
07 - Swerytd
04 - Andy W
03 - Stylo
03 - losaavedra
02 - Imamazed
02 - Slack Bladder
02 - Paul Nash
01 - Boits
01 - Ginger Jesus
01 - Nick Rivers
01 - Daddy Maz

Have fun David!

VOTE: Greggles

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