Thanks for the feedback received on the last post. Here's another looong post and if people have time to say yes/no to the sketches that'd be great - they were a reject from the E4 radio comp.
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More of the same
It is very heartening to see something this sharp, and well written didn't win.
As it means good stuff didn't get through.
Very funny, and well written, beautifully paced as well. Not a duff one in the lot.
Send 'em to Roughcuts, or if you could make them topical NR/TS.
Only advice if sending to contests I'd cut them down to 2-3 of the best.
It's rare to read something in critique that feels so professional.
Thanks sooty - that's praise indeed! What's Roughcuts?
Do you - or anyone - know where I can find someone who 'does voices' and can help me to record them? It might help when I send them out...
Fraid not.
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Rough cuts is a no pay, open talent thing Comedy unit do, goodle them.
These are great, particularly the first Flat 17. Have you tried Recorded For Training Purposes?
It's not too bad a piece, but too long. Maybe it could be split into seperate parts as a runner.
Could suit Recorded For Training Purposes, but I don't know if they've been guaranteed another series.
Good call - cheers Graham and Winter, that would've been perfect for this. Hopefully they'll run another competition.
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Yeah, nice one, Stratton. Now you've made all our replies look like the work of delusional mentals.
What is it with all these delusional mentals offering critique on work that is not there? Delusional mentals
Quote: Graham Bandage @ July 28 2008, 3:10 PM BSTYeah, nice one, Stratton. Now you've made all our replies look like the work of delusional mentals.
Delusional mentals are pretty much my target audience...
I think I bought their last album.