Once you're getting near what you all consider a stable draft, a good test is to take a highlighter pen and highlight where you think the laugh points are.
This can be very revealing!
Devil's Blurb Episode 1 Page 3
Right Guys this has lost all momentum dates have been missed I am going to review whats left to do and redistribute the jobs I am going to brief Charley today I will be back this afternoon with new assignments.
Takeabow thanks for that comments mate 
Any word on those new assignments?
Sorry everyone I was snowed under with Project "B" I have PM'd you all with the tasks I'd like you to get on with any prob PM me it's all looking on track to be 1st draft ready by monday
OK - I'm waiting for my orders.
David I have done a widdy little bit. Not sure if it is good enuf tho so cant wait for you to check it out. I want to see the whole first epy to have a nose.x
Not up to me to check Charley - although I know your contribution will give it a whole new feel.
Looking forward to seeing it.
Neither have I - well not for a few days. When was it?
Quote: Gavin @ May 26, 2007, 3:59 PMSorry everyone I was snowed under with Project "B" I have PM'd you all with the tasks I'd like you to get on with any prob PM me it's all looking on track to be 1st draft ready by monday
I haven't been PM'd. Is that a clue? I know when I'm not wanted. 
Quote: David Chapman @ May 26, 2007, 8:49 PMNeither have I - well not for a few days. When was it?
This post is supposed to be a reply to mine, but I deleted my post, so it now looks like he responded before I posted.
I'm psychic you see. Also you have to be careful in this game.
On a couple of occasions I've posted then regretted it and deleted it. Have to be careful no-one responds before you delete it though.
Hi David and Earman I pm'd a few days ago David you have completed
part of it so thanks, in future I will post assignments here as PM'ing
them seem to be riddled with problems (not being able to look back etc)
- Dev and Catherine Collect Souls in montage
If earman and David could work on the above section please lets get that tied off. Charley and I will work on the
- Dev lets Catherine in on the underhanded ways of soul collecting
Once these are done we've got the groundwork completed
Is that a completed script you've posted? I'll read it tomorrow if it is.
Well done Gavin and everyone else for getting this far.
Drinks are on me, as long as the drinks are water, tap water.
no it's not completed yet but will be soon stay tuned batfans
I like Tap Water Leevil - as long as it's from round here cos apparently we've got the best tap water in the country in Sutton.
Earman - have you got some ideas for this bit or do we start from scratch?
I'll try to print off the pinned thread at work tomorrow. Got no printer linked here and I'd rather read it on paper. Then we can see the irregularities.
Quote: David Chapman @ May 28, 2007, 11:59 PMEarman - have you got some ideas for this bit or do we start from scratch?
I'll pm you something either tonight or tomorrow.