Quote: Sofa_Matt @ July 11 2008, 11:20 AM BSTNope.
You're right Sootyj clowns are very suspicious, but what is it about our postmen that you dont trust?
They get to handle your post, and hang around your house early in the morning.
Sitcom - appraisal welcome Page 10
Also - you are right about the 'well'paced' turtle - I shall keep the turtle aspect of it, but will have a look at alternatives to 'well-paced'.
You can't visualise a flavour.
You know the obsession with swearing, who does that remind me of?
I don't know, what? Muldoon isn't obsessed with swearing, it's a defense mechanism.
Quote: davidmoreton @ July 11 2008, 11:31 AM BSTI shall keep the turtle aspect of it, but will have a look at alternatives to 'well-paced'.
"banned"?
Quote: sootyj @ July 11 2008, 11:32 AM BSTYou know the obsession with swearing, who does that remind me of?
Wasn't Jerf more of an imbecile than this though?
Who's Jerf?
Quote: davidmoreton @ July 11 2008, 11:18 AM BSTAny feedback on the latest extract? Anyone?
It didn't make me laugh, but I didn't hate it. I can easily see it being produced and ending up on my screen.
Aaron Brown, you are davidmoreton and I claim my £5.
david, to make other people feel closer to TJOY and get them more involved with your work, why not allow them to put forward their own written extracts for Muldoon and his joke shop antics? It could be like a competition with you being the ultimate judge? OR what if the winner got featured as his/her own character in a future extract of your script?
Def.
Some interesting stuff there Morrace, a bit too 'fan fiction' in places - and I do think it was a bit too Mighty Boosh in places awswell (particularly the whole time travel /surreal stuff).
Do you have any text specific points about my work? Because I trust that you are not a wind up merchant.
No he's a genius! Deferenz issued the challange at 12:21 and he conceived, wrote and posted an entire scene by 12:36.
On that evidence one can only assume that Aaron either endorses this or is responsible for it.
Excelsior!
Also, Aaron is Deferenz too.
I'm starting to wonder if everybody on the forums is Aaron. Apart from me, obviously. Although I'm not even sure about that.
Quote: Graham Bandage @ July 11 2008, 1:17 PM BSTAlso, Aaron is Deferenz too.
I'm starting to wonder if everybody on the forums is Aaron. Apart from me, obviously. Although I'm not even sure about that.
We are both Aaron, Graham. Err...I mean Aaron?
All we need next is Muldoon to create an account then complain about his treatment in the script and how no one takes him seriously.
EDIT:
This gets more amusing. Someone has just created the account name - 'aaron-the-dictator'. I await his postings with glee...
Def.