Quote: Scatterbrained Floozy @ June 25 2008, 5:31 PM BSTMy poems are all awful though! Well, I think they are.
Post some in the Criteque section. Come on, they can't be worse than "I wandered lonely as a clown"
Quote: Scatterbrained Floozy @ June 25 2008, 5:31 PM BSTMy poems are all awful though! Well, I think they are.
Post some in the Criteque section. Come on, they can't be worse than "I wandered lonely as a clown"
All the critique here is for laughing at, and they'd certainly provoke that reaction!
Quote: Scatterbrained Floozy @ June 25 2008, 5:33 PM BSTAll the critique here is for laughing at, and they'd certainly provoke that reaction!
Where's your confeeedonce?
I told you! I left it on the bus!
Quote: Scatterbrained Floozy @ June 25 2008, 5:36 PM BSTI told you! I left it on the bus!
You'll never get it back then! Woe is Scatters!
I know...I rang the bus company and everything! They said seeing as it was so small in the first place, it'd be hard to find.
Like a piece of hay in a stack of needles...
That could be quite easy to find, actually...
How so?
For one thing, it would be painful!
A big magnet would attract all the needles, and you could be left with the hay? I dunno! It just sounds easier to find than it's more common counterpart idea.
Quote: Scatterbrained Floozy @ June 25 2008, 5:42 PM BSTA big magnet would attract all the needles, and you could be left with the hay? I dunno! It just sounds easier to find than it's more common counterpart idea.
Sniff.
Well if you are going to take the commoner's side...
It tends to be safer to be a sheep, unfortunately!
Well Baaa to you 'an all
Show us a poem Robyn. We won't laugh, promise!
Yeah Robyn! I prefer to call you Scatters. I don't know why!
Bye bye guys.
I expect a poem when I come back here!