Quote: Jake How @ May 18 2008, 7:34 PM BSTYes I have but it will be one of the later episodes Episode 18 and I write better then I type.
Just one pedantic question.
Did you submit the script in longhand?
Starting Out? Page 4
Quote: Jake How @ May 18 2008, 7:34 PM BSTYes I have but it will be one of the later episodes Episode 18 and I write better then I type.
Ah... but you dont know the difference between 'then' and 'than' though...
Which all goes to show you can't believe all you read.
I think there are a few people out there hoping to publish Henry Root-style accounts of their forum discussions.
I wasn't really aware of Jake How, apart from him signing me up this website without my permission, so I honestly thought he was writing for Waterloo Road.
Then I read everyone's comments.
Then I read his teaser script.
Then I laughed.
Quote: Winterlight @ May 19 2008, 9:29 AM BSTThen I read his teaser script.
Then I laughed.
That's more than my teaser scripts get. Keep with it JH!
BTW I wouldn't belittle JH's claim, I once went to Ricky Gervais's Politics stand-up and so he let me write all of Extras - it can happen like that.
okay so we seem to have changed the topic. thanks for the advice on the first page 
Sorry, Zuhaib.
You may even get some more serious answers if you are extremely patient.
Quote: KJSmyling @ May 18 2008, 11:28 PM BSThttp://jakehow.freeforums.org/plot-1-t19.html
I think it's what known as a teaser... I hope Jake hasn't broken any writers agreements, he's signed, by publishing on the web...
kjs
F**k off is that mine.
Quote: KJSmyling @ May 18 2008, 10:48 PM BSTIf the rest of your episode is as good as this Jake, we are in for a real treat....
kjs
Eddie and Rachel are only weeks away from there wedding and Rachel is in the garden
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Rachel: Eddie can you come here please ?Eddie: Yeah what is it ?
Rachel: Have you got all the stuff for the party ?
Eddie: Yes sure and don't forget that Tom and Davina are coming around today
Rachel: I won't don't worry
Eddie: I just have a feeling that everything is going to go wrong
Rachel: It won't we have made it this long
Eddie: Yeah you are right
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Eddie walks out of the house and gets in his car. Rachel is planning a party for tonight with all the staff from Waterloo Road. Rachel phones Davina
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Davina: HelloRachel: Hi Davina it is Rachel are you and Tom still coming tonight ?
Davina: Yeah sure we are
Rachel: That is good and the party is out 8.00pm
Davina: Ok see you later
Rachel: Bye
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Rachel then looks around to see her dad called Dave who she has not seen for over 20 years
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Rachel: Dad is that you ?Dave: Yes I have come to see you
Rachel: Where have you been for all that time ?
Dave: I could not find you and after you mum died I just gave up
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Rachel hugs her dad
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Dave: Well I heard you are getting married is that true ?Rachel: Yes
Dave: So where is he ?
Rachel: He out getting a few bits for the party tonight
Dave: He better take care of you !
Rachel: Yes he does dad
End of scene
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It is 8.00pm and the party is on Tom and Davina walk into the room
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Davina: This is some partyRachel: Thanks and are you going to get married soon ?
Davina: Not yet but Tom has been talking about
Rachel: Davina I would like you to meet my dad
Dave: Hello
Davina: Hello
Eddie: Yes well Davina Tom said can he have a word with you ?
Davina: Yeah sure
Eddie: Rachel your dad has told me that he will stop the wedding
Rachel: Why would he say a thing like that ?
Eddie: How do I know ? we have got to get rid of him
Rachel: He is my dad Eddie
Eddie: Yes ok I don't trust him much for some reason
End of scene
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It is the wedding and Eddie and Rachel are getting ready
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Rachel: Eddie come on we are laterEddie: Yeah sorry I got up late
Rachel: well come on we have got to make it to the church
Eddie: Come on then let's leave
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Rachel and Eddie drive to the church
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Quote: Winterlight @ May 19 2008, 9:29 AM BSTI wasn't really aware of Jake How, apart from him signing me up this website without my permission, so I honestly thought he was writing for Waterloo Road.
Then I read everyone's comments.
Then I read his teaser script.
Then I laughed.
We're all terrible people. I'm going to stop now.
Quote: Jake How @ May 19 2008, 5:37 PM BSTF**k off is that mine.
Is it yours?! Unlikely someone else has written something like that!!
ah, stop it folks, one could destroy a young writer for life
Am I missing something? Is this guy really a writer for Waterloo Rd or not?
Quote: Charly @ May 19 2008, 7:01 PM BSTAm I missing something? Is this guy really a writer for Waterloo Rd or not?
Well, it depends how you look at it.
If you look at it factually - then no.