A new commissioned video what i wrote, produced, directed and edited. If it's rubbish - blame me! David Chapman from this very board is in the first scene - watch out De Niro!
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Very nice! I really need a wee now.
I liked it. I sniggered as the man forced his way into the urinal.
My only criticism is that I think the section from boardroom to toilet was too long and affected the pace. Apart from that, it was fine.
Enjoyed this one. The urinal barge was great. Agree with Winterlight about the walk to the toilets. I'd cut it down to having him just enter. The shot of the pissing went on a bit to long too I thought.
It was good, but Ill echo the thoughts of those above; the walk was excess flab that should have been cut. But good stuff.
Very Good!
the bosses piss should have been a cloudy dark yellow colour.
I thought that bloke in the boardroom was good!
Quote: David Chapman @ May 2 2008, 8:04 PM BSTI thought that bloke in the boardroom was good!
He looked a bit shifty to me.
Echo the above - very nicely made and shot. Which one was Chappers?
Good Good not gonna offer any more crit its all been covered. Good piece of work mate.
Quote: SlagA @ May 3 2008, 3:27 PM BSTEcho the above - very nicely made and shot. Which one was Chappers?
The grey haired old git who nods in the meeting and then just walks out.
I didn't need a piss.