http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=Fejt9J_-lZY
Is this funny?
James Bond Reflects
no
The man has a point.
No real jokes, very little pace, and it's James Bond interviewed so what?
It needs to be a lot shorter, and it needs to actual go some where. Maybe Bond has nightmares about killing Blofeld?
Or for a real literate feel contrast neurotic, needy Bond of the books, with Bond ubermenasch of the films.
ha ha
I agree, I don't think that's funny!
But I wanted to hear more opinions as I think that maybe the idea and setup could be copied and done a whole lot better
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U3bt9r91uDs
WHAT ABOUT THE ABOVE PART
Ok Oliver that was less funny then the one before. The guy doesn't sound like Moore, or Connery et al, and if you're trying to be ironic in that regard it ain't working. The jokes are not very funny, the pace is slow, and ensures the few jokes are still born.
James Bond is a wonderful figure for lampooning, unfortunately that means from the get go your going to be compared to the best (not to mention some of the silly Bond films them selves).
And this film just smacks of poor script, poor acting, poor central concept, even the lighting is horrible. You really need to get the writing right before you even begin.
Quote: sootyj @ April 22 2008, 7:58 PM BSTOk Oliver that was less funny then the one before. The guy doesn't sound like Moore, or Connery et al, and if you're trying to be ironic in that regard it ain't working. The jokes are not very funny, the pace is slow, and ensures the few jokes are still born.
James Bond is a wonderful figure for lampooning, unfortunately that means from the get go your going to be compared to the best (not to mention some of the silly Bond films them selves).
And this film just smacks of poor script, poor acting, poor central concept, even the lighting is horrible. You really need to get the writing right before you even begin.
Errrm..... It's not mine!
I want to rip it off (see above thread)
but thanks for feedback
Quote: Oliver @ April 23 2008, 3:46 PM BSTErrrm..... It's not mine!
I want to rip it off (see above thread)
but thanks for feedback
It's not often a plagiarist is so honest in public. Sure to go far in comedy 
Quote: Oliver @ April 23 2008, 3:46 PM BSTErrrm..... It's not mine!
I want to rip it off (see above thread)
Oh dear.
To avoid confusion in future, it's usual to post your own stuff in critique, not somebody else's. Otherwise I'd be putting forward a great scene set in a Torquay hotel.
Quote: Badge @ April 23 2008, 4:17 PM BSTTo avoid confusion in future, it's usual to post your own stuff in critique, not somebody else's. Otherwise I'd be putting forward a great scene set in a Torquay hotel.
sound great!
Might I recommend a kipper
Quote: Oliver @ April 22 2008, 5:47 PM BSTI think that maybe the idea and setup could be copied and done a whole lot better
1st think that made me laugh in here today!
Quote: M Lewis @ April 23 2008, 7:14 PM BST1st think that made me laugh in here today!
I know! It's good to be controversial.
Makes me feel alive..like crime etc