INT. LOCKER ROOM – DAY
A S.W.A.T. TEAM SUITS UP. TWO OF THE TEAM SNIGGER BEHIND ANOTHER’S BACK.
OFFICER:
What?
HE CATCHES SIGHT OF HIS BACK IN THE MIRROR. HIS OUTFIT HAS BEEN TAMPERED WITH. IN BOLD LETTERS:
T.W.A.T.
OFFICER:
You guys are dicks.
S.W.A.T. quickie
Nice, but more of an addition to a sitcom maybe
that's exactly what I thought.
I think it works as a standalone sketch.
Not the strongest thing ever, but something to fill 20 seconds of a sketch show quite easily.
Or as a cartoon strip?
It's better than:
Reporter: Hi! I'm Ed Winchester
ENDS
And I love The Fast Show.
Yeah, it could work as a cartoon strip as well.
possible addition could be the other two turning around to reveal - 'I am a dick' post it notes on their backs. a 'hidden' post it note is and always will be big, clever and funny.
Nice Simple funny gag. ;-)
Yeah, nice.
Yep - very nice. Would laugh if I saw this on TV (if I hadn't already read it online...)
Just from a filming point of view, would it actually say TAWT in the mirror, or am I being dense?
Hmm some one says
You been working out, you look taught?
Quote: Barbs @ April 7 2008, 10:21 PM BSTYep - very nice. Would laugh if I saw this on TV (if I hadn't already read it online...)
Just from a filming point of view, would it actually say TAWT in the mirror, or am I being dense?
Sure, that's how it would look, but the mirror is only so he can see it. We'd just see the jacket.