DARK LIGHTING, THREATENING, ATMOSPHERIC MUSIC. SHOW PERSONS EYES, HAIR. BUT IMPOSSIBLE TO IDENTIFY THEIR AGE OR ANYTHING ELSE.
CUT TO HANDS TYPING.
SHOW SCREEN AS WORDS APPEAR.
TYPES OUT: I THINK HE IS REALLY GREAT. PEOPLE SHOULD LAY OFF HIM.
VOICEOVER:
The person you are talking to online might not be who they say they are.
PAN OUT TO SHOW IT’S A YOUNG BOY TYPING
SHOW THAT HE’S BEEN WRITING ON A GUARDIAN UNLIMITED MESSAGE BOARD ABOUT THE ZIMBABWE ELECTIONS
Thats good, and I like the joke, but maybe a little more explanation
Maybe a final line,
beware daily mail readers can use the internet too.
Its good Barbs but I think the words he types should sound more sinister as those adverts you are lampooning are to warn against predatory paedophiles.
True, ajp - I saw an ad and knocked it out in literally 30 seconds. It could definitely be refined.
I don't know about the Daily Mail line sooty - I agree maybe more explanation - or extending it slightly, but, much as I hate the DM, I'm not sure this is the sketch to slag it off in.
Fair play, I think it jsut needs one other line at some point to clarify whats a really good gag.
Quote: Barbs @ April 4 2008, 4:19 PM BSTDARK LIGHTING, THREATENING, ATMOSPHERIC MUSIC. SHOW PERSONS EYES, HAIR. BUT IMPOSSIBLE TO IDENTIFY THEIR AGE OR ANYTHING ELSE.
CUT TO HANDS TYPING.
SHOW SCREEN AS WORDS APPEAR.
TYPES OUT: I THINK HE IS REALLY GREAT. PEOPLE SHOULD LAY OFF HIM.
VOICEOVER:
The person you are talking to online might not be who they say they are.PAN OUT TO SHOW IT’S A YOUNG BOY TYPING
SHOW THAT HE’S BEEN WRITING ON A GUARDIAN UNLIMITED MESSAGE BOARD ABOUT THE ZIMBABWE ELECTIONS
Very good. 
Haha, yes, I like it. Nice twist!