How about throwing it over her shoulder?
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I'm going to go with the mother (sans pram) sniffing the baby, looking pissed off, then taking off into the sky.
sorry, don't get it. It reads more like a scene from a sitcom...or was it supposed to be?
Quote: Fantasy Bazaar @ March 27, 2008, 6:54 PMsorry, don't get it. It reads more like a scene from a sitcom...or was it supposed to be?
Do you think? It wasn't meant to. I can't imagine what sort of sitcom it would be from. Maybe a Scrubs style flashback?
I like it very much, excellent stuff. A pedant might say a couple of the lines at the end are superfluous once the point has been made. But really good as is.