British Comedy Guide

A Womb with a View Page 3

How about throwing it over her shoulder?

I'm going to go with the mother (sans pram) sniffing the baby, looking pissed off, then taking off into the sky.

sorry, don't get it. It reads more like a scene from a sitcom...or was it supposed to be? Errr

Quote: Fantasy Bazaar @ March 27, 2008, 6:54 PM

sorry, don't get it. It reads more like a scene from a sitcom...or was it supposed to be? Errr

Do you think? It wasn't meant to. I can't imagine what sort of sitcom it would be from. Maybe a Scrubs style flashback?

I like it very much, excellent stuff. A pedant might say a couple of the lines at the end are superfluous once the point has been made. But really good as is.

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