Quote: Jake How @ March 25, 2008, 1:13 PMNo her friend is dead.
Oh OK then can you solve the mystery of who murdered your punctuation?
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I think I will write it again.
Tell me if this is better:
Plot: Liz How lives alone and goes out with her friends, she works 2 jobs and lives in a one bedroom flat and her sister sometimes stays there. Liz has many friends but one day when walking home her best friend is killed now she is on a mission to find out who the killer is with the help of her ex-husband.
Quote: ajp29 @ March 25, 2008, 1:15 PMOh OK then can you solve the mystery of who murdered your punctuation?
Ok, now do one about the grammar!
Quote: Jake How @ March 25, 2008, 1:19 PMI think I will write it again.
Tell me if this is better:
Plot: Liz How lives alone and goes out with her friends, she works 2 jobs and lives in a one bedroom flat and her sister sometimes stays there. Liz has many friends but one day when walking home her best friend is killed now she is on a mission to find out who the killer is with the help of her ex-husband.
Her husbands dead aswell 
No.
Yes.
I'm trying really, REALLY hard not to burst out laughing in the middle of my office.
It seems a bit similar to Randle & Hopkirk (Deceased). Is that the idea?
Aaron I think I need that picture of the Bunny with the Pancake on his head.
Ok So I re read your idea and I took a shot and it.
How about this Jake:
Plot: Liz How is a single woman, works two jobs, and lives in a lousy one bedroom flat with her freeloading sister (insert name of sister). The one thing in life Liz does have are her friends; so when her best of friend is murdered Liz takes in upon herself to track down the killer.
If you are doing a short synopsis I would leave out the ex husband. It's too much information for such a short paragraph.
Quote: Aaron @ March 25, 2008, 1:27 PMI'm trying really, REALLY hard not to burst out laughing in the middle of my office.
Me too! I am actually crying. Too funny!!!!!!
Jake - that was so bad.
Quote: Paul W @ March 25, 2008, 12:37 PMMoving to General.
Many thanks! 
Quote: Jake How @ March 25, 2008, 1:19 PMI think I will write it again.
Tell me if this is better:
Plot: Liz How lives alone and goes out with her friends, she works 2 jobs and lives in a one bedroom flat and her sister sometimes stays there. Liz has many friends but one day when walking home her best friend is killed now she is on a mission to find out who the killer is with the help of her ex-husband.
"and her sister sometimes stays there" - utter, sheer genius.
Sounds like an episode of Columbo.
I am working on the next part.
Will there be a death in the bedroom? Like, involving spray cream from a can? That would be great.