These are some I have written myself and some I saw in a cartoon or a meme and made into videos:
Gis a push mate:
Have you seen my newspaper:
Christmas Chocolates:
If we put our Facebook pictures into photo albums:
A few more silly sketches.
All good. Among your chief talents is that you don't waste people's time with pointless dialogue. Chocolates one has the makings of a series of Rob n Carl odd couple skits.
Quote: Kenneth @ 16th December 2018, 9:39 AMAmong your chief talents is that you don't waste people's time with pointless dialogue.
That's a talent that 99% of dialogue-writers do not possess.
Every line of dialogue should have a purpose (it might be a serious dramatic purpose or it might be intended simply to get a laugh) and the line should be just long enough to achieve that purpose while remaining appropriate for the character speaking.
For me, the best thing about Carlos's sketches is that they take place in a little world where the characters are simply plodding along through life and accepting its ups and downs in a commendably philosophical fashion.
An enterprising TV executive might well commission a series based simply on the atmosphere and the characters. The funny stuff would be a bonus!
Excellent Carlos.
I chuckled in the right places.
Ya mate Rob's a little star on the quiet too.
Was that the missus?
Thanks all, I like to keep them as short as possible where I can. I have read that it has to be cut down to only what is needed and that's what I try to aim for, so I'm glad it's noticed.
The thing with Rob is that he is not too keen on doing the videos, but I convince him and he sort of likes them on the quiet.
No that wasn't my missus Stephen, that was a friend of mine.
worth a laugh for sure! love the format
I could see a Rob and Carl sitcom.
Quote: Rood Eye @ 16th December 2018, 3:32 PMAn enterprising TV executive might well commission a series based simply on the atmosphere and the characters. The funny stuff would be a bonus!
Quote: beaky @ 19th January 2019, 5:02 PMI could see a Rob and Carl sitcom.
Great minds, obviously.
Yours is a bit faster than mine!
I liked these alot, they were punchy, quick and quite funny. Good job man, I've given ya a sub