A little quirky sketch I filmed 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZjK3mwQoaY&list=UUl7f3CP3oPFAOgPEHgccs9w
Bus Stop
The sketch has much to recommend it: it's nicely filmed and the two characters are visually compelling.
Much of the dialogue is funny and entertaining and the writer is clearly not without talent. That being so, I'm surprised he/she felt the need to 'gross-out' the audience with the lurid description of the cat being killed and with the male character's revolting kissing technique.
All in all, though, it's a very decent effort.
Hey Lukas,
Not bad at all. Best bits were: comments on the hair, the kiss and your reaction to the fly. It was a bit hit and miss, with the shaky camera and the OTT glasses. I'd agree with Rood Eye's comments. But well done, liked it.
Quirky and odd, I thought it was a great sketch. Could have done without the shaky camera, but the writing and execution of it worked well.
thank you all, really appreciate your feedback 