Adolf'll Fix It

Quickie I sent to Treason.
Apoplectic Savile lovers get ready to spit out your coffee.

Adolf’ll Fix It

A NAZI JIMMY SAVILE/HITLER WITH CIGAR AND HITLER MOUSTACHE

HITLER
Now zen now zen guys and girls, good evening unt velcome to “Adolf’ll Fix It”. Last week I fixed it for everybody in Poland. Tonight, I haff here a letter from a very special leetle blue-eyed blonde-haired boy.

(READS) “Dear Adolf, will you fix it for me to leave Jersey? Nothing exciting ever happens here.”

(LOOKS UP) I think not, little man, but I’m sure we can liven things up a bit for you. Maybe decorate your school viz a few swastikas and gas anybody that tries to bully you.

(READS)“Please fix it for me, signed, Ezekiel Goldstein.”

(LOOKS UP) Release ze dogs.

ENDS

I don't know who Ezekiel Goldstein is, so I don't get it. But I liked the set-up.

Smiles ignorantly.

EDIT: Unless it's just a random Jewish person, then I get it.

Quote: Leevil @ March 8, 2008, 2:50 PM

I don't know who Ezekiel Goldstein is, so I don't get it. But I liked the set-up.

Smiles ignorantly.

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Just the most Jewish name that I could think of at the time.
Maybe a bit oblique.

Yay, I'm not dumb!

Try changing it too someone famous to make it more obvious maybe?

Quote: Leevil @ March 8, 2008, 2:54 PM

Yay, I'm not dumb!

Try changing it too someone famous to make it more obvious maybe?

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You could be right.

Well it is Springtime!

I think there is something really quite funny here, the combination of characters works so well in an unexpected way. I am disappointed there is a Jersey connection but I understand why it is there. I am sure there is a place for this character.

It works well, but I think adding the Nazi element confuses, an otherwise good skit. Or a more subtle down played conclusion maybe?

Yeah, I suppose the setup could be seen as a little contrived. I quite liked the ending though. I think the Ezekiel name is fine. Using a famous Jewish person would be a bit too obvious, but then the topical shows do seem to like that sort of thing...

I think I made the Jimmy character Adolf so I wasn't actually saying Jimmy is a Nazi, if you see what I mean. Maybe it doesn't work so well.

Anyway, I thought some play on it was a funny concept, especially because Sir Jimmy blatantly has f**k-all to do with the atrocities. He just visited there, for God's sake! Funny juxtaposition though. Anyhoo.

I thought it was good as it was and the name was obvious enough.

Didn't like the Jersey connection

Perhaps repeat
"unt zen release zee dogs"

"Now Zen, Now Zen, NOW ZEN!!!!

Quote: Sunnysideup @ March 8, 2008, 6:29 PM

Didn't like the Jersey connection

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Was that buttons or a zip?

Keep 'em coming Chappers!

I liked it, gave me a wee chuckle.
There was something funny in the idea of a German Savile.