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Missing!

A YOUNG WOMAN HAS REPORTED HER FLATMATE MISSING. THE POLICE HAVE BEEN TO TAKE DETAILS, WHAT SHE WAS WEARING, LAST KNOWN WHEREABOUTS ETC. AS SHE SITS IN THE FLAT, THERE’S A KNOCK AT THE DOOR, IT’S THE POLICE. THE FLAT IS IN DISARRAY, CLOTHES EVERYWHERE.

GIRL: Oh come in officer, is there any news?

OFFICER: Am I disturbing you?

GIRL: What? Oh the mess? I was just looking for something.

OFFICER: There has been a development miss yes. I’m afraid we’ve found a body down by the river. From the description you gave us we believe it could be your flatmate.

THE GIRL BECOMES HYSTERICAL.

GIRL: NO! It can’t be, why? She never hurt anyone.

OFFICER: Calm down miss, it might not be her. I’m sure there are 100s of one eyed, one legged green haired dwarfs living round here.

GIRL: Yes of course, look on the bright side you mean?

OFFICER: Exactly! You know it makes sense.

GIRL: Can I see it? The body I mean.

OFFICER: Yes of course you can. But I must warn you, she’s not pretty.

GIRL: Well I know she was no oil painting.

OFFICER: She’s received multiple stab wounds to the chest.

GIRL: It’ll put my mind at rest.

OFFICER: I understand, I’ll take you.

THE OFFICER AND THE GIRL ARRIVE AT THE SCENE. THEY WALK OVER TO THE COVERED BODY, THE OFFICER PULLS BACK THE SHEET TO REVEAL THE BODY OF A YOUNG WOMAN. THE GIRL BEGINS TO SCREAM.

GIRL: NO! NO! Tell me this isn’t true, why? Why me? I only bought that top yesterday, now it’s ruined...the bitch!

Laughing out loud. Very funny sketch Ray. Loved the tag. Defo one for the laydez!

Very good indeed mate, 10 out of 10.

Thanks for the pm Ray

MATE?? Once bitten Steve! Laughing out loud

:D :D :D

No probs Rood

Yes, I liked it. I liked that you had a joke as well as the punchline, too rare a thing around here! And whilst typing this I just got it even more >_< so it's even better, well done.

Need to tidy up the formatting though.

Liked this a lot...very funny Laughing out loud

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Huh? Hang on though, isn't it just slightly offensive? ;)

No, its not. It,s what a great writer can produce when not preocupied with being a vaginal orifice.

Better to be preocupied than pre-owned.

Much love ;)

Ode to a seconhand c**t...

Well, I've seen lots of pricks come and then go...

though whence they are spawned I'm fukked if I know...

The sauce of these fukkers oft eludes me...

But Im sure they are all that fukkin Roodeye ID.

xxx

Nice :D

Good one Ray.

Good - if anything, I'd have stopped it after, "I only bought that top yesterday!" and let the rest sink in for the audience...

Quote: writeone1 @ March 8, 2008, 6:23 PM

Ode to a seconhand c**t...

Well, I've seen lots of pricks come and then go...

though whence they are spawned I'm fukked if I know...

The sauce of these fukkers oft eludes me...

But Im sure they are all that fukkin Roodeye ID.

xxx

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I enjoyed that. Good stuff.

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