Lazzard, don't you think my other sketch on critique, The over 80' female world paperweight karate champion is original
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I have yet to read it.
I was commenting on the Teddy Boy gag.
OK. Read it.
Not heard it before - so it's original.
Thank-you Lazzard, what do you think of the content?
It's an OK joke - but no more than that.
One day you must teach me how to write a good sketch
I taught myself to be funny by annoying people in internet chat rooms. Sometimes I made people 'lol', a lot of the time people thought I was an annoying idiot. Being funny isn't straightforward at all, and you have to be prepared to look like a dick as you practice, lol. You have to keep self analysing to prevent future mistakes. Many people can't handle that, which is partly why there aren't more funny people.
Quote: Jerf Roberwitz @ 10th September 2017, 6:31 PMOne day you must teach me how to write a good sketch
I write hopeless sketches - you don't want a lesson from me