Sketch Idea need a bit of advice

******Panic Over******

Yeah, I liked the scene you set, but the joke was just trailed off to nothing. Good visuals, for some reason I pitured the Big Train cast doing this one. You do need a punchline though, excuse the pun - unless there's your punchline? kinda self-aware sketch?

Oh that's not the ending. I just started to get very self conscious that it was plagarism, so stopped half way through.

I can't remember seeing it.

I was expecting a very different pint of Bitter!
Like the barman was going to pick up an empty glass, say some bitter words into it & hand it to the man.
I liked it. I think it can end how it is. Its more of a visual tag, although a punchline could also be added if you wanted too. Agree with Leevil on the Big Train sketch.
You could do a whole run of sketches based on that barman.

Quote: Charley @ March 3, 2008, 4:23 PM

I was expecting a very different pint of Bitter!
Like the barman was going to pick up an empty glass, say some bitter words into it & hand it to the man.

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I thought that too.