I've just started making YouTube videos about household objects that talk to each other (as you do) and would like some feedback!
Thanks!
I've just started making YouTube videos about household objects that talk to each other (as you do) and would like some feedback!
Thanks!
Like the concept, but felt the conversation was a bit too flat with two apparently intentionally bland speakers.
I thought the script could either do with finishing on "unhinging" (to make it a short, sweet, deadpan sketch with a pun) or involving some other slightly less "wooden" household object characters, preferably some sort of disagreement or development to the conversation, and a veritable orgy of silly puns.
If you're going to rely so much on puns you need to get them out a lot quicker - not worth the wait otherwise.
I don't think you should've used a flat dull drawing. Would've preferred it if you had filmed a real door and an iron (not difficult). If you want to use animation then put more work into it and use some different shots.
Also I thought the voices sounded too similar.