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Take a look at this video on YouTube:
Lettuce Spray - Fake Infomercial
Interesting, it's very well made and neat.
There's a couple of nice gags in there cat/rabbit one especially.
But overall it feels like you've decided to focus on a couple of pretty limp puns and no real punchline.
Be good to see what you do with a stronger script.
Looks great. Sounds great. Pleasing pun. But 60 secs would have been more than enough.
Loses it's way at the cat lady, I'm afraid