Some critique would be nice.
Also you guys might want to contribute to this website too as they accept submissions. It is an American comedy website called Points in Case.
I like writing comedy articles, but nothing really political or satirical. Simply very personal, inward, self indulgent musings.
I don't expect you to read them all obviously but heres a link to four. If you read just one and leave some feedback that would be great-
Court's A Stupid Name Anyway
http://www.pointsincase.com/articles/courts-stupid-name-anyway
Hey You Give Me A Job
http://www.pointsincase.com/articles/hey-you-give-me-job
I Put The Fear Of God Into My Dog
http://www.pointsincase.com/articles/i-put-fear-of-god-into-my-dog
The Day I Turned Your Mom Upside Down
http://www.pointsincase.com/articles/day-i-turned-your-mom-upside-down