I'm looking for people who are willing to read and give feedback on the pilot script I have produced for a sitcom series I am working on.
Send me your email address if you would like to help out.
Thanks
Script consultations
Put some of it up in Critique Josh. I'm sure there will be people willing to read your script, or at least some of it, and give you feedback.
Quote: Mattytheswan @ 16th October 2014, 9:11 PM BSTPut some of it up in Critique Josh. I'm sure there will be people willing to read your script, or at least some of it, and give you feedback.
Otherwise, you'll have to pay a professional.
Quote: beaky @ 16th October 2014, 9:46 PM BSTOtherwise, you'll have to pay a professional.
Although, thankfully, not always with money.
Critique is the answer Josh.
Quote: Craig H @ 17th October 2014, 11:45 AM BSTAlthough, thankfully, not always with money.
Sexual favours are acceptable.
Champagne, chocolate, cake...?
The bubbly and feisty Marc to the rescue!
The only professional, Marc?
You didnt need the comma.
Quote: Marc P @ 18th October 2014, 11:03 AM BSTYou didnt need the comma.
Quote: Marc P @ 18th October 2014, 11:03 AM BSTYou didnt need the comma.
You might have needed an apostrophe?
Quote: Paul Wimsett @ 21st October 2014, 12:35 PM BSTYou might have needed an apostrophe?
Either way, you certainly didn't need a question mark.
I don't like to brag. 
Quote: Marc P @ 21st October 2014, 12:46 PM BSTI don't like to brag.
you didn't need the n, the t or the apostrophe that time > Marc.