A YOUNG WOMAN IS IN A SHOWER CUBICLE.
MODESTY PANELS IN THE GLASS DOOR ENSURE WE DON'T SEE TOO MUCH BUT WE CAN SEE THE WATER SPRAY BOUNCING OFF HER SVELTE FORM.
SHE'S HOLDING A BOTTLE OF SHAMPOO
WOMAN (TO CAM)
Brazilian? This won't interest you. It's a new shampoo especially for PUBIC hair. And I love it.
SHE TURNS THE BOTTLE TO FACE CAM
ZOOM IN ON BOTTLE
LABEL READS "WASH AND COME"
Good take on crap shampoo.
Quote: Charley @ February 23, 2008, 9:49 PMGood take on crap shampoo.
What? You can get shampoo for crap too?
crap is real poo, shampoo is, well, a sham.
Nice little sketch.
Plagarise let nothing evade your eyes,
but most important of all cheat
T Lehrer
That said it was a tad nonsensical
Not bad, not brilliant, ok, so so.
Not my cup of tea as it were but can see the merits in the sketch.
Quote: ian_w @ February 24, 2008, 12:55 AMNot bad, not brilliant, ok, so so.
That's a very fair comment.
In fact, it's exactly how I feel about this sketch.
It's not a sketch I would ever have posted in the absence of other shower-based sketches written by other people but I hope it's sufficiently different from the others to give it some merit in its own right.
Thanks also, of course, to everyone else who commented.
Quote: FoxyBox @ February 23, 2008, 9:41 PMLABEL READS "WASH AND COME"
I would have gone with "COME AND GO"
Not brilliant as a sketch but it wouldn't look out of place on a lot of the sketch shows on TV.
kjs
KJ my hat is doffed to the man who could find the second Wash and Go pun, a task I failed at .
Perhaps a man washes his hair in the garden, his neighbour asks why
Its wash and mow
Or the shampoo that doubles as a tasty cordial
Squash and go
Or for your smelly friends
Go and Wash
the pun-da-mentalist is back in the house oh yes!
Quote: FoxyBox @ February 23, 2008, 9:41 PMA YOUNG WOMAN IS IN A SHOWER CUBICLE.
MODESTY PANELS IN THE GLASS DOOR ENSURE WE DON'T SEE TOO MUCH BUT WE CAN SEE THE WATER SPRAY BOUNCING OFF HER SVELTE FORM.
SHE'S HOLDING A BOTTLE OF SHAMPOO
WOMAN (TO CAM)
Brazilian? This won't interest you. It's a new shampoo especially for PUBIC hair. And I love it.SHE TURNS THE BOTTLE TO FACE CAM
ZOOM IN ON BOTTLE
LABEL READS "WASH AND COME"
Brilliant!
