Thanks Lazzard. Much appreciated x
Give this a watch! Page 2
I didn't get a kiss.
xx
That's alright then. Puckering up is half the battle in what I call showbusiness.
Loved it Paul. Better lighting/sound and youre away mate. 
Cheers mate! Thanks so much for watching! X
I'm seeing a pattern here with the kisses! 
I thought it was really funny! Strong comedy acting and a solid, simple idea. It had the right dose of surrealism and had a lot of nicely laid humour in it! Reminded me a bit of It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia (the episode where Charlie is upstaged by another possible friend to the group).
Agreed that you could slice the dance off the end (though I strangely wanted to watch it all) and aside from the tramp's epilogue being cut-away too soon, the epilogue in general is not that funny.
I would watch something else your group did fo' sure. Nice!
It was done with great enthusiasm but you've hit the age barrier.
Anybody watching aged over 21 will be shagged out.
Quote: Paul Longley @ 28th May 2014, 9:46 PM BSTOut of interest, which one is the Tim Walker look a like? We are struggling this end to work it out...
The one sticking his head in the microwave at the start. The Tim Walker I'm talking about isn't famous (yet), but he's a comic genius who resides upon these forums occasionally.
I'd echo others comments that if you condensed everything down to 3 minutes you'd have a lively and better piece. I'd certainly be interested in seeing what you do next.