Tony Cowards
Monday 10th March 2014 11:53am [Edited]
Wiltshire
1,762 posts
Quote: NateSean @ 9th March 2014, 9:51 PM GMT
I think like one-liners they should be used sparingly, like a seasoning. If you depend entirely on puns and one-liners than you better make them good.
There's a lot of truth in this, although Tim Vine, who I love, has made a career on some pretty ropey jokes that he has learnt to "sell" really well.
The big problem with puns is that people seem to think they are easy but what they forget is that writing bad puns is easy, writing good puns is very, very hard, it's not just a case of taking two words which sound alike or a phrase which can be interpreted in two different ways, a good pun or wordplay joke involves some consistent logic in the two stories and not just having two random ideas smashed together.
Wannabe stand ups also forget that what looks like a great pun written down might not work when spoken out loud, I often see comics saying words in a way that no one in real life would just because they are trying to shoe horn it into a pun.
Eg. Something like "I went to the Reading festival, waste of time taking all those books with me", works okay written down but it's never going to fly on stage.
Quote: The Drifter @ 26th February 2014, 11:36 PM GMT
"I got arrested because my wife was stoned (beat) apparently you can only do that in the middle east now"
My re-write, for what it's worth, would be something along the lines of...
My wife got stoned the other night, (beat) still it's her own fault for having an affair in Abu Dhabi.
(I'd try this onstage and see how it went down, if I thought it needed tweaking I'd possibly change the punchline although, initially, my thought is that "affair in Abu Dhabi" is quite pleasing to say and hear as it has a nice rhythm and is alliterative without being annoyingly so).