British Comedy Guide

Skit Comp 31.1 - 7.2.13

Thanks for another phwoarsome skitcomp and congratulations to GAPPY for winning again. Please get pished as a farth and PM me with a subject for next wank.
Hence:

Votes - Points - Name
4 - 10 - Gappy
1 - 5 - Playfull, Stonked, Mr Darkly
Speckled mentor: Danphobic, Blobster, Supermanc

Your new subject: HOTELS (chosen by Gappy). I hope we can accommodate that, golly aren't I humourous.

Rules:
One entry/vote per person. Anyone can enter regardless of colour, sexual preferences or inside leg measurement, except Scrappy Doo.
Can be a sketch, joke, lyric or anything else as long as it's yours and vaguely linked to the topic. Please try and only post your entry/vote and no other posts.
You can edit your entry as much as you want, up until the closing time.

Competition Closes: 7.2.14

Overall Leader Board is now:
Position - Points - Name
1 - 36 - Stonked, Gappy
2 - 30 - Playfull
3 - 20 - Jakob Jensen, Tursiops
4 - 12 - Otterfox
5 - 11 - Carlos Manwelly
6 - 5 - Mr Darkly, Sootyj, Stephen Goodlad, Mr Sunshine
7 - 1 - Charleywolf

VERY HALLIWELL

HOTEL RECEPTION. GERI HALLIWELL and GUEST.

GERI So, tell me what you want, what you really really want.

GUEST Yes, I...

GERI Looook at me.

GUEST Yes, I'd like a room...

GERI Who do you think you are? Mi chico Latino?

GUEST No, I'm Tom... Hey Tom 'n' Geri!

GERI Stop right now, thank you very much.

GUEST Sorry. A room for two...

GERI If you wanna be my lover...

GUEST No, it's for...

GERI For tonight, it's the night...

GUEST My mother...

GERI Maaamaaaa.

GUEST A double for the price of a single.

GERI Two become one... Say you will be there.

GUEST Yes, but the weather forecast...

GERI It's raining, men.

GUEST Men? There's only me.

GERI You gotta get with my friends.

GUEST Look, I'm getting bored of this.

GERI Spice Up Your Life!

GUEST Really, it's...

GERI Too much...

GUEST Bye now.

GERI Goodbye, my friend.

How do you beat prostitutes at poker? Hotels

1: Thanks so much for answering our calls. I think we've truly created a high-class, personable hotel here, but we just can't balance the books. To be honest, your consultation might be a bit of a life saver.

2: Tish tish, it's my job to offer advice to the catering and service industry - and I must say I found your case quite intriguing. So, I've had a good look around, and I think there are lots of very impressive facets to the residential experience you offer.

1: I'm gratified to hear it.

2: Yes, there's a real air of quality about the place: mirrors on the ceiling, all that stuff. A bit chintzy, perhaps, a bit retro, but that brand of glamorous luxury never goes out of style.

1: We aim to balance panache with decadence, here at The Hotel California!

2: Lovely. But, there are a few areas in which the odd tweak might improve business. For example, there's the wine.

1: Oh, do you think so?

2: Yes. It is really really unusual for a hotel not to serve wine. And you've not served it for quite some time, I understand.

1: We don't have that spirit here.

2: Well, first up, it's not a spirit. This is pretty elementary stuff, I'm surprised you've not picked it up during your time in the trade. And secondly, champagne *is* actually a type of wine, and you have gallons of that.

1: Pink champagne.

2: Yes.

1: On ice!

2: On ice, quite. My first advice is to employ a new bar manager and/or sommelier. And, on a similar topic, the dining. I was present for Sunday lunch. Now, much as I admire the tradition of the Sunday roast, was it really necessary to let the guests slaughter an Aberdeen Angus in the dining room?

1: I just thought it was the next logical step from tableside flambes.

2: But you gave all the guests knives!

1: Steely knives.

2: I don't care what they were made of! Metallurgy is a moot point after you've filled the public with free mojitos and let them stab a heifer! The cleaning bill was gigantic, the meal was three hours late, and one customer lost a toe.

1: Alright, I'll consider reducing the stabbing.

2: Very wise. And finally, why, pray tell, is a 450 room hotel only one twelfth full.

1: Oh, well, we have to save the other rooms, in case the guests come back.

2: What are you talking about?

1: It's our motto - you can check out any time you like, but you can never leave!

2: That's insane.

1: We're programmed to receive! Another motto.

2: That just sounds stupid - like an android gang bang. If you want to make money, stop this idiotic policy.

1: We can't possibly do that, it's the soul of the hotel. It would be like taking the Singapore Sling out of Raffles, or the cheese biscuits out of The Ritz.

2: In which case, I regret I cannot help you any further. I bid you good day; my invoice shall be in the post.

1: Oh, I don't think so.

2: What?

1: I'm sorry, Miss, but you can't leave. You can *never* leave.

2: What...what do you have there?

1: This? Oh, this is just my steely knife, Miss Portas. [Cackles]

2: [Screams to fade]

Joyce: Mary!

Mary: What do you want I'm busy?

Joyce: These guests are disgusting, that's my ninth used condom today.

Mary: That's out of order; I've only found five so far.

Joyce: Sorry Joyce we can't all be superstar chambermaids

Mary: That puts you on 30 this week, it's unfair.

Andrea: Arrrrr! Help!

Joyce: What is it dear?

Andre: There's a dead body in the bed.

Mary: Oh Andrea, what have you done?

Andrea: It wasn't me I swear.

Joyce: You know what we have to do now Mary.

Mary: Yes Joyce we have to arrest her, you are going away for a long time Andrea.

Andrea: Please no, I have kids. I need this job.

Mary: Or we could just kill her.

Andrea: HELP! SOMEONE PLEASE!

Joyce: That's a new record.

Mary: I know she didn't even put up a fight, wimp!

Andrea: What?

Mary: Evelka didn't crack so much as a smile for weeks

Andrea: Thats cruel.

Evelka Walks Past.

Evelka: (Stern Swedish accent) What is this shouting? Grow some balls little sausage!

Joyce: They're just pillows under the sheets, look.

Mary: Yeah we slipped them in here before.

Andrea: You mean nobody is dead? But what about all this blood?

Joyce: Ketchup dear, hurry up and clean it.

Mary: It's your first day so make a good impression love.

FX: Door clicks.

Joyce: Mary, look Mr Linstrom has just left for breakfast.

Mary: Quick then, I've been eyeing up that watch of his for ages.

A SMALL RATHER ECCENTRIC LOOKING MAN IN HIS 40'S APPROACHES A DESK IN A HOTEL LOBBY.

MAN:
Hi I'd like to book two rooms please.

RECEPTIONIST:
Alright sir. I'll just see if there is anything available. What's the name?

MAN:
Clonkers, Jeffrey Clonkers. I want two rooms.

RECEPTIONIST:
Yes I am checking this for you now.

JEFF:
You don't understand. I want two rooms. One in this hotel and another in that boutique hotel down the road.

RECEPTIONIST:
Sir I cannot book you into another hotel. You will have to contact them if you wish to stay there. I will try and accommodate you for the nights you wish to stay here and then you can contact the other hotel for the nights you want to stay there.

JEFF: (EXASPERATED) (LOOKING AROUND AT ANOTHER HOTEL PATRON)
Unbelievable! What kind of a service do you call this?! Alright, alright, alright.....I'll take the two rooms here.

RECEPTIONIST:
Okay sir and how many guests are staying?

JEFF:
Just me.

RECEPTIONIST:
Apologies sir, I misunderstood. You're booking different rooms for different nights?

JEFF:
No, no the same night.

RECEPTIONIST: (CONFUSED)
So you want to stay in two different rooms on the same night?!

JEFF:
Exactly. And I want them side by side. I don't want any of this opposite ends of the corridor nonsense. I can't stretch that far.

RECEPTIONIST IS TYPING. JEFF STRUMS HIS FINGERS ON THE DESK IMPATIENTLY.

JEFF:
Can you hurry up, I'm very annoying.....OOOOhhh!!! Whats wrong with you?! You shouldn't be using your thumb on the enter key. Wrong, wrong, wrong.

RECEPTIONIST:
We're all booked out. You should have booked online. You can't just show up at a hotel on the week of a festival and expect to get a room.

JEFF:
Two rooms.

RECEPTIONIST:
...expect to get two rooms.

JEFF:
I'll just take one then.

RECEPTIONIST:
We have none.

BEAT

JEFF:
I'll take it.

END.

RADIO SKETCH.

FRIDA: Erick where have you been?

ERICK: I was outside waiting to greet the guests.

FRIDA: Well where are they?

ERICK: The coach pulled up then turned around and drove off.

FRIDA: What again? And no one got off it?

ERICK: No, I tried to wave and get their attention but they all just looked the other way!

FRIDA: I told you an Ice Hotel was a bad idea.

ERICK: But they are all the rage. And all our Rooms were reserved so quickly online.

FRIDA: Yes, but no one is coming in. Three days now we have been open and not one guest through the door.

ERICK: I don't understand it. The snow is falling. The front of the Hotel is beautifully carved like a fairy tale ice palace. Could it be the name ?

FRIDA: What, 'The Polar bear's Ice Hotel'? It's a great name and the online feedback was great.

ERICK: Well what can it be!

POSTMAN: Postman! Is this The Polar Bear's Ice Hotel?

FRIDA: Yes.

POSTMAN: Thought so, here is your post and this must be yours then, I saw it buried in the snow outside.

ERICK: What is it?

POSTMAN: A Letter 'T'. I thought 'The Polar Bear's Ice Hoel' was a funny name for a hotel.

TWO FLAMBOYANT LOOKING CHAPS, JULES AND RAUL ENTER A RUSSIAN HOTEL AND APPROACH THE DESK, MANNED BY TWO STERN LOOKING LOCALS

Receptionist 1 - (Broken English) "Look at those two. Something is not quite right."

Receptionist 2 - (Broken English) "Yes, I see. Their trousers look a lot tight."

Jules - "Hello gorgeous, any chance we can get a room?"

R 2 - "You want room together?"

Jules - "Of course. Does he come with room service?" (Winks at Receptionist 1)

R 2 - "Yes. Have you stopped here before?"

Jules - "Definitley not, if I had those blue eyes would have been in my dreams ever since."

(R 2 and R 1 look at each other and frown)

R 2 - "Are you wanting single or the double bed."

Jules - "Why don't I let you decide, Mr."

R 2 - "Are you comfortable with the double bed?"

Jules - (Shouting to Raul) "Think you can trust yourself in bed with me?"

(Jules and Raul burst out laughing, before collecting their room key and heading to the lift)

R 1 - "Those two, they look like trouble"

R 2 - "I think they will be harmless enough. His eyebrows, they had been waxed and his piercings made him look like the big girls blouse."

(Both laugh, then trail off. A well dressed man in a suit enters the hotel)

Man - (Offering hand shake) "Dave Smith, Pleasure to be in Russia chaps."

R 1 - (Panicked) "You see that Yuri. This man, he is coming on to me"

Man - "What?.. No.. You've got it all wrong,"

R 2 - (Shouting) "SECURITY! SECURITY! THIS MAN IS MAKING HOMOSEXUAL GESTURES!"

END

A MAN RUSHES INTO HOTEL RECEPTION.

RECEPTIONIST - Are you alright, sir?

MAN - I've just checked in to room 276. There's a naked man tied up in my wardrobe.

RECEPTIONIST - Oh! Did he say what he was doing in there?

MAN - No, he was gagged as well.

RECEPTIONIST - Did he have ginger hair?

MAN - No.

RECEPTIONIST - Oh, not him then. I'd put you in another room, but we're full up. I could give you a discount for lack of wardrobe.

MAN - You don't seem overly concerned about the naked man. Do you think I should take his gag off?

RECEPTIONIST - Ooh, I dunno. He might get a bit noisy if you do.

MAN - So do you think I should call the police or the noise abatement society?

RECEPTIONIST - Well you don't have to get funny with me. The last time this happened, it was just the chef getting over-enthusiastic on his first-aid training.

MAN - Well if that's your your attitude, I don't want to stay here anyway. Where's the manager?

RECEPTIONIST - I'll just ring through to his office. (SPEAKS ON THE PHONE) Is Justin there? Oh right. (TO THE MAN) Sorry, he's a bit tied up at the moment.

INT. A LOUNGE
A MAN AND WOMAN, BOTH IN THEIR THIRTIES, ARE SITTING ON A SOFA

HIM
I'll always remember the first pavlova my mother knitted for me.

HER
Surely you mean pullover?

HIM
No. It was definitely a pavlova. I can see it now. It had a v-neck with meringue sleeves, which she piped full of lovely fresh cream. Didn't wash up too well, as I recall.

HER
Oh, stop it. You're too much. I do love being your girlfriend.

HIM
Hmmmm.

HER
Tell me about your father. You've hardly ever mentioned him. Is he still alive?

HIM
Oh yes. He's still going strong. I haven't seen him for years and years and years and years and years, though. He's something of a recluse.

HER
Really? How extraordinarily challenging. Where does he live?

HIM
In one of his 60 hotels. Which is to say that he lives in the one hotel which isn't actually a brothel.

HER
Oh my goodness. Brothels. How deliciously decadent. I'm loving this man. Tell me more about this reclusive renegade.

HIM
What else can I tell you? Oh yes, he farms sheep in one of the state rooms.

HER
Now you really are pulling my leg.

HIM
No. It's just a small flock of blackface ewes. But big enough to merit his having a working sheepdog.

HER
That's just monumentally mental.

HIM
That's all I can tell you, really. I only hear what my father wants me to hear. Well, generally, anyway.

HER
Ooooh. Are you about to spill the beans on a riveting little rivulet of a secret? You are, aren't you?

HIM
Erm ...? Well, it's not so much a secret. More like bad news, really. Something I heard from my father's mahout.

HER
Your father's what?

HIM
Mahout. He's the elephant handler.

HER
He's got elephants in the hotel?

HIM
Elephant. Just the one.

HER
Even so! Well, go on. Don't keep me dangling. Did I say that I love being your girlfriend?

HIM
Hmmm. Well, the word is, apparently, that he's selling up his other hotels. Which means that I'm going to have to find somewhere else to live.

HER
Oh. You mean this is one of his hotels?

HIM
Yes. Oh look at the time already. We'd better get cracking - it's nearly party time.

HER
One of the 59 hotels?

HIM
Yes.

HER
I see. So when you say party time ..?

HIM
Yes?

HER
So when all your awfully amusing friends come over and have lots of group sex with me ...?

HIM
Yes?

HER
Oh god, I'm not actually your girlfriend, am I.

END

Stonked gets the 5 star rating from me. Lots of mad ideas creating a wonderful comic world of it's own.

Stonked. Loved the V-necked pavlova with the meringue sleeves!

I enjoyed Stonked too, lots of pleasingly baroque little phrases littered throughout, but I shall cast my lot in with Otterfox (although, by his standards, the sketch is in danger of actually making sense Laughing out loud)

Stonked! Liked 'em all though.

Stonked was wonderfully creative, Gappys was lovely and dark, darkly lovely. For sheer craft though it's got to go to Mr. Monkhouse.

@gappy I had come down with a bout of normality during the writing of the sketch :-)

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