Hey.
I posted two of these a little while back, just generally seeking some sort of feedback.
What I have here are some YouTube videos of me performing comedy poems. I am aware that my delivery in them is a bit off- currently working on improving that for live performances. But anything else you can add would be great! I'm also interested to know if people think they work best like this (poems) or maybe some of them could have music behind them and be raps??
I dunno.. Like I said, feedback would be great. Obviously don't worry about watching them all.
1st: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DbSpNsM3_b0
2nd: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lf0873F4Ptw
3rd: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hPnwzYgj_qg
4th: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uQwU84MgMNQ
5th: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1J6OokjAws0
6th: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zIRjK-ieTZM
Thanks very much in advance.
Arron x