Just a quick thing I put together with a chum...
John Lewis Christmas ad commentary
Got about twenty seconds in and you irritated me. Sorry haven't seen original ad but why not take some more time and do something good?
I'm going to assume that comment was satirising the sort of lazy, unhelpful and unintelligent posts that people put on here from time to time.
Quote: Michael Hughes @ 25th November 2013, 9:46 PM GMTJust a quick thing I put together with a chum...
I liked the surreal sillyness, although it didn't make make me LOL.
No if you are going to put something in showcase work on it. Something you threw quickly together as you say isn't what it's for. If you want helpful and insightful critique that you are prepared to listen to and learn from then critique is the place. Although you may still get commentary that is neither.
Quote: Marc P @ 26th November 2013, 10:58 AM GMTNo if you are going to put something in showcase work on it. Something you threw quickly together as you say isn't what it's for. If you want helpful and insightful critique that you are prepared to listen to and learn from then critique is the place. Although you may still get commentary that is neither.
Maybe bother watching the entire thing before the overwhelming need to express your feelings takes hold. Or just don't comment at all.
Quote: Michael Hughes @ 26th November 2013, 1:27 PM GMTMaybe bother watching the entire thing before the overwhelming need to express your feelings takes hold. Or just don't comment at all.
I seriously couldn't. Sorry if a mouthful of chicken tikka tastes bad I don't eat the rest. Put it in critique and I may .. offer some advice. But, like I say, putting it in showcase is doing nobody any favours least of all yourself.
The narrator grates rather; there are some genuinely funny lines, but it all feels a bit shooting fish in a barrel. Mind you a facility for spinning out gags to order is a talent in itself.
Courtney Love's Vagina is a bit classier than Courtney Love's Hole but didn't they refer to her as Courtney Loves Cox in Kath and Kim?Or am I thinking of another Courtney?Probably am.Cheers Mikey Boy.
PS Best not to mince words with these people who may , I repeat , may critique you if you're very good and sit up straight and fold your arms properly.