Another sketch added, please feel free to comment, I welcome your feedback.
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I liked the wony homemade vibe, I think that this often adds to the comedy (cf Vic & Bob, early Boosh, Adama & Joe), and I was enjoying it. But I'm afraid I thought you could have gone somewhere far more interesting than a rather hoary old pun.
Thanks gappy, I'm glad you think the home made thing works for this type of sketch,we thought so too. We have quite a few more ideas for him but would welcome any suggestions.
TallPaul.
I wasn't very keen on the homemade vibe. It's something that can work, but here it's just too amateurish. The sound is pretty bad and why does the main character barely break above a whisper? It made it pretty difficult to understand. The pun is old and predictable, but filmed and executed better it could make young children laugh.
Thanks for your comments Ben, we'll take them on board. Mr T's voice is as it is because that's the way he speaks. I admit our equipment isn't that great and we may have to invest in something better to put out better quality videos.
Thanks for watching.
regards.
TallPaul