Thanks for all the feedback on the first 3 scenes. I have taken the comments on board and I'm re writing them. This is what I have at the moment for scenes 4 and 5. Hopefully the plot becomes a bit clear.
Scene 4- INT- the flat
The flat has been tidied. Matt is in the lounge doing press ups.
Matt: 613, 614, 615, 616
Jess walks in and sees Matt.
Jess: oh sorry.
Matt jumps and picks up a picture frame from the side.
Matt: don't come any closer! I'm armed.
Jess: you must be Matt. I'm jess, Danny's girlfriend.
Matt: his girlfriend? He didn't say he had a girlfriend. I don't believe you. Get back!
Jess: look at the picture.
He looks at the picture he is holding and it is of Danny and jess on holiday.
Matt: oh sorry. You can't be to careful these days. (He puts the picture down). That's a nice picture.
Jess: thanks. Where is he?
Matt: he's gone jogging. He's been gone a while, he should be back soon.
Jess: oh. I've just come to get my bag, I left it here yesterday morning. Do you mind if I wait?
Matt: no it's fine.
Jess: thanks. So, 616 press ups. That's quite a workout.
Matt: 616? Oh no, when I'm struggling I do that to give me a bit of a morale boost. I actually did about 15.
Jess: oh. So how long have you known Danny.
Matt: years now. We've been friends since we were 5.
Danny comes in. He picks up the post and walks over to the table and puts it down.
Jess: Oh your back. Why didn't you mention me to Matt. I was nearly attacked with a picture frame.
Danny: What?
Matt: Never mind. How was your jog?
Danny: yeah good. It's the best hangover cure there is. You'll have to come with me tomorrow morning.
Matt: I don't think so. I'm sorry but I just don't see the appeal in jogging.
Danny: ok fair enough.
Danny is looking through the post.
Danny: look at this. Bill, bill, bill and bill. Great.
Matt: How have we got so many bills.
Danny: oh no sorry. These are for Bill. He lived here before me and I still keep getting his post. I have to send them on to him.
Jess: I don't think I've ever seen the place looking so clean.
Danny: yeah I know. I can't even begin to tell you how long it took to clear up.
Jess: I bet it was ages.
Danny: I don't know. I can't tell you because I wasn't here. Matt did it while I was out jogging.
Jess: wow. I think you could learn a thing or two from Matt.
Matt: I thought I would make myself useful. I've done the toilet as well. You could eat your dinner off it now.
Danny: yeah well. We have plates, we might as well use them.
Jess: So Matt, what is he like to live with?
Matt: Yeah he's ok. He does snore quite loudly though, I could here him from my room.
Danny: I don't snore that loudly.
Matt: you do. I thought there was an earthquake at one point.
Danny: well how do you think I feel being woken up by you singing one direction in the shower.
Matt: oh. I didn't know you heard that.
Danny: I wouldn't mind if you could actually sing. Your worse than Jedward.
Matt: what do you mean "if I could sing". I was in the school choir.
Danny: well your school must have been desperate for singers then.
The doorbell goes.
Jess: oh that will be Lucy. We are going shopping so I told her to meet me here.
She goes to answer the door. Matt is looking in the mirror flattening his hair. Lucy and Jess come back in the room.
Lucy: hi.
Danny: hi. Lucy. This is Matt. Hes moved in with me now. He's one of my oldest friends.
Matt: yeah I'm 107. Haha. No I'm not I'm 25.
Lucy: oh nice to meet you Matt.
Matt: you to. Did Danny tell you about the party we're having later.
Lucy: yeah ill be there.
Matt: I'm doing the buffet. Nothing to fancy. Just a small spread. Maybe a cheesecake for desert.
Lucy: great, I can't wait. I can't stay to late though, I'm going jogging early tomorrow morning.
Matt: you go jogging as well. I love jogging. What time do you usually go.
Lucy: about 6.
Matt: AM!!!
Lucy: yeah. Why is that a bit early for you?
Matt: no. A bit late if anything. But I might have a lay in tomorrow and go at about 6 so I'll probably see you there.
Danny: I thought you didn't see the appeal of jogging.
Matt: when have I ever said that?
Danny: a few minutes ago. I said you will have to go jogging with me tomorrow and you said you didn't see the appeal.
Matt: I thought you said something else.
Danny: what?
Matt: errrm, dogging.
Everyone stares at Matt.
Matt: yeah. I thought you said you had been dogging and I should go with you tomorrow. I just don't see the appeal in dogging.
A few seconds silence.
Jess: right well we better get going if we are going to get that train. Come on Lucy.
They walk to the door.
Jess: it was nice to meet you Matt.
Matt: yeah and you. I will see you both tonight. You can have the first sausage roll Lucy.
Lucy: thanks. I'll see you tonight. Bye.
Lucy and Jess leave. Matt turns to Danny looking angry.
Matt: thanks a lot. Why did you tell her I don't like jogging.
Danny: what about you, why did you tell Jess about me snoring? We have had so many arguments about that in the past. Now every time I say I'm not snoring very loud she will bring that up.
Matt: well at least you didn't bring up dogging. She probably thinks I'm a right weirdo now.
Danny: look, we will make a deal. I will put in a good word in about you to Lucy tonight, if you do the same to jess about me.
Matt: right ok. Deal.
They shake hands.
Danny: I still can't believe you bought up dogging.
Scene 5-EXT- Outside the supermarket
Matt has just come out of the supermarket. He has 3 shopping bags in each hand. Martin walks over to him.
Matt: alright Martin?
Martin: not really. I just tripped over. I've cut my knee so I'm just going to get some plasters.
Matt: oh right.
Martin: what's all that stuff for?
Matt: it's for the party tonight.
Martin: you're having a party tonight?
Matt: yeah. Didn't Danny tell you.
Martin: no.
Matt: oh it must have slipped his mind. It's just so I can meet a few more people. You should come along.
Martin: will there be food?
Matt: yes. I'm doing a bit of a buffet. It should be good.
Martin: Have you got celery?
Matt: no I haven't.
Martin: (looking disappointed) oh. It's ok I'll still come, I will just have to bring my own.
Matt: ok great. See you tonight.
Martin: yeah ok. (He scratches his arm). This heat rash is getting worse.
Matt: they're annoying aren't they. When I went on holiday a few years ago, I got quite a bad heat rash. I got some cream and it was fine in a few days.
Martin: oh thanks. I'll try and get some cream in here as well then. Can I have your number so I can let you know what time I'll be arriving tonight.
Matt: err, ok.
Martin gives Matt his phone and Matt puts his number in it.
Martin: thanks. I'll see you tonight.
Matt: yeah, see you tonight.