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SCENE FROM A HOUSE KITCHEN - DOMO AND LISA ARE JUST HOME AND ARE SITTING AT A TABLE HAVING JUST PICKED UP SOME FOOD IN THEIR LOCAL CHIPPER AFTER DROPPING THEIR KIDS OFF TO MUSIC LESSONS.
DOMO: 'Did you put the kettle on for a cuppa, Lisa'.
LISA: 'I did. It's just coming to the boil. Can you not hear it?'
DOMO: 'Oh, yeah. I can'.
LISA IS TUCKING INTO HER CHIPS WHEN SHE GETS ANGRY.
LISA: 'For feck sake, Domo. These are re-heats. I was really looking forward to them'.
DOMO OPENS HIS BAG AND TUCKS IN TO SEE IF HIS ARE THE SAME.
DOMO: 'The w*nkers. Two fifty for that sh*te. I'll let them know the next time I'm in there, love'.
LISA: 'Do that. Let them know you weren't happy'.
DOMO: 'I was starving too. I'll be saying to them I was about as happy as a Muslim being offered a BLT sandwich at the tail end of Ramadan'!
LISA SMILES AND GETS UP FROM THE TABLE TO MAKE A POT OF TEA.