Police woman
Again, this has a nice flourish but IMO it doesn't stand on its own two feet as a sketch. It feels like a little part of something bigger. (Maybe that's what it's supposed to be.) That's not to say that writing isn't good. It's not bad. Although in this piece you could give the same direction in far fewer words.
Not as good as your ice skater sketch. A nice little visual gag though.
ok this time Lulu
Hmm bit weak, kind of a slightly obvious punch line.
Maybe a riot squad, where they all have batons, but she has a dildo?
Cute, slick and funny.
Could work well as part of a series of Police Woman sketches.
Sorry, but I find Sootyj's joke more than a little offensive.
Bye.
I want to see the sketch now so I can picture the dildo thing.
The dildo is a very funny idea but I did like the original sketch, a bit sexist but there you go
Quote: FoxyBox @ February 17, 2008, 8:16 PMCute, slick and funny.
Could work well as part of a series of Police Woman sketches.
Weirdly enough I find the make up mirror more offensive.
I thought the dildo was more empowering. I was going to help a gay friend design sex aids that could be used for self defence. On the grounds that the police couldn't arrest you for going equipped to commit a crime, with one of our defensive toys.
The mirror just smacks of lazy 70s sketch show crap, or a particularly weak episode of Smack the Pony (which I think is great).
Sooty's version will appeal to 14-year-old schoolboys all over the world. Global audience. Don't knock it.
We 14 year olds rule the world look at Sarkozy, and Bush
Albeit Gordy is more of a sulky 16 year old Goth, who gets ID'd buying cider and fags.
Can picture him moaning, it's not fair.
Perry my skits, was 3 police men in a row with riot gear and big truncheons.
Scans to number 4 a police woman in riot gear, except she's got a big dildo, implying she brought it by mistake.
Bet Oscar Wilde wished he'd written that.