The funeral

INT. ANDY'S BEDROOM

5 male friend's wearing black suits are gathered around chatting emotionally at there friend's wedding

Andy

Argh, (pause)(holding back tears)

I still can't believe he's gone we had

so many good times, such a shame.

Kyle

Yeah he died way too young, I still

remember playing with him like it was

yesterday...

With the camera now on a broken xbox 360

James

He had so much more to give.

The end

It seems confusing. Is it about them losing their playing partner to marriage or about the death of an xbox. Doesn't work for me sorry.

I didn't even clock it said wedding after the black suits I must have scanned it and thought funeral, I think it should say funeral not wedding. I can see it has potential but think it has probably been done before in some shape.