I really liked it. As for being funny enough, well this bit:
SCIENTIST
The truth is, at his point, were really not too sure; but we haven’t ruled out something to do with cat shit.
made me laugh loud enough to alert the neighbours.
I really liked it. As for being funny enough, well this bit:
SCIENTIST
The truth is, at his point, were really not too sure; but we haven’t ruled out something to do with cat shit.
made me laugh loud enough to alert the neighbours.
Yea pretty good Matt.
I have never seen Big Train. I liked your sketch. I think it is a tad more visual.
I really like Amanda.
I love the way men can get a female character so right.
Quote: Badge @ February 15, 2008, 1:24 AMI really liked it. As for being funny enough, well this bit:
SCIENTIST
The truth is, at his point, were really not too sure; but we haven’t ruled out something to do with cat shit.
made me laugh loud enough to alert the neighbours.
I too found this bit the most amusing.
But "made me laugh loud enough to alert the neighbours"?
Really?
Well written and a good read.
Quote: garyd @ February 15, 2008, 2:32 PMI too found this bit the most amusing.
But "made me laugh loud enough to alert the neighbours"?
Really?
Well written and a good read.
I have thin walls. But come to think of it I might be confusing what happened when I stubbed my toe.
This sketch is head and shoulders above 99% of sketches that I read on here.
That is all.
I thought this was excellent and I too love the catshit line. Very good stuff.
Well, thanks for all the comments, and Im glad some people liked it. i know its quite a sedate piece really, and quite a lot of the humour is in the visual, but I like writing these sort of bits, rather than just the wham-bam-big gag and out style sketches all the time.