Hi Everyone,
This is my first time posting on here so I hope I do everything correctly,
I've wrote a sketch and I'd love to hear what everyone thinks of it,
Thanks
Tony
THE ENDEAVORS OF MAN BY TONY WATSON
Setting: we are 400 years in the future, we have now expanded from just living on earth to living on many planets, we are not alone and humans and other aliens mix, our sketch takes place in a local bar on earth.
INT. MODERN BUT COMFORTABLE BAR. EVENING
Harold the Bar Owner is stood at the bar as the door opens and Ricky a self confessed but very deluded ladies man and regular customer walks in and sits at the bar.
RICKY:
Evening Harold, bit quiet in here tonight, I was hoping there might be a few ladies in here like last night.
HAROLD THE BAR OWNER:
I think you scared them all off yesterday Ricky, how did it go with that nice blonde last night?
RICKY:
A gentleman never tells Harold you know that, and can I have a Pint of Lager please.
HAROLD:
A gentleman never tells, Ha! she turned you down more like.
Ricky looks upset and says in a slightly embarrassed voice.
RICKY:
No, No, well, yes,
Just then the bar opens and another two regulars walk in, Billy a quiet man who likes to listen to others talking, and Tom a Shy but good-looking man unable to find love.
RICKY:
Hello Billy, Hello Tom, how are you?
TOM:
I'm Depressed, So I thought I'd come and have a beer, cheer myself up.
HAROLD:
Now come on Tom, You know beer is not the answer, no one ever found the solution to their problems at the bottom of a beer glass you know!
PAUSE
HAROLD:
Well apart from that time I was looking for a Drinks Coaster, but that's besides the point.
TOM:
I just feel my glass is always half empty
RICKY:
Well don't drink so fast
HAROLD:
Or just drink half's, order two, when you've drunk one order another, that way you will never have a half empty glass again.
TOM:
Ha, HA! You know what I mean, All I want is to find a nice girl, an earth girl this time! before you butt in Ricky with another of your great suggestions.
RICKY:
Hay, Just because you messed up, don't blame me, there nothing wrong with www.get-a-cheap-wife.mars, it's one of the better dating sites on the universe wide web. not my fault if you didn't know GSOH stood for Genetically Sexchanged Older Humanoid!
TOM:
Well what's wrong with the old fashioned way, you know, like people used to do in the old days before all this computer dating became the norm, I mean what's wrong with just going to a bar, saying hello to a nice girl, She thinks your lovely, you think she's lovely, you listening to her, find out you have so much in common and falling in love, is that too much to ask?
HAROLD:
I think that's a great idea Tom, I found my wife when I was in this very bar.
TOM:
Really?
HAROLD:
Yes, it was a quiet night and I was bored, so I sat at the bar and went on www.get-a-cheep-wife.mars and there she was, the woman of my dreams, even to this day I still find her out of this world.
RICKY:
Isn't that because you have to travel to Mars to see her?
TOM:
Your all missing the point
BILLY: (With a sad voice)
My brother moved to Mars
HAROLD:
Did he?
BILLY:
Yes, it's quiet a sad story, we actually fell out over it, we had an argument about him wanting to move to Mars and become a Mime artist.
HAROLD:
What happened?
BILLY:
I told him if he was going to waist his life being a mime, I never wanted to hear from him again.
The Bar Door Opens and a beautiful blonde walks into the bar and takes a seat between Tom and Ricky.
RICKY:
Hello, nice to see you again, Michelle isn't it?
MICHELLE:
Oh, it's you again.
RICKY:
No need to be like that, only saying hello,
MICHELLE:
Look I told you last nice, I'm not interested please stop bugging me.
RICKY:
I thought we had a nice time last night?
MICHELLE:
Look, if you were the last man left in the whole universe and my only options were to go out with you or marry a 3 eyed half breed from the planet Zark named Zakaroo, Zakaroo would be very happy right now, got it?
Ricky looks confused
RICKY:
No, what you trying to say?
Michelle turns away from Ricky in disgust and finds herself facing Tom.
TOM:
You're Lovely
MICHELLE:
Thank you, you seem lovely to.
TOM:
I'm a bit shy,
MICHELLE:
Well it's nice to meet you, can I buy you a drink, your glass looks half empty?
Tom smiles.
TOM:
Thank you, I'd love to have a drink with you, but I think you will find, my glass is half full now!