Hey folks, I did this for a university project. Some feed back and criticism would be massively appreciated. Also I'm thinking of using some of it for a competition is that a good idea? Thanks. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kChwe4wCweY
Stand-up video
Very good.Terrific material.Keep at it.Even a good Scottish jakey accent.Usually sounds Welsh/Albanian with other comics.
Really good. Good material and nice delivery.
Great material - liked the Chinese horse meat gag.
Would benefit from a slightly slower slightly more relaxed delivery. But very good set.
Wouldn't we all , Playfull, wouldn't we all.Nervous start but recovered well and stormed it.You don't need to be nervous , Dan,you've got the material and the presence.
Thank you guys, I really appreciate the feed back 
Very impressive. I like your style.