Quote: Ben @ August 2 2013, 2:10 PM BSTI think you should do a few more in this style here and there. I take it they're fairly quick to exit.
It cost nothing, was quick to produce, and the outcome was rather good; so we almost certainly will.
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Can I just suggest that you make it more snappier, as in use less frames. It wasn't quite professional standard but was close and that will come with practice 
Wouldn't less pictures make it less snappy? You'd sit on pictures static longer.
Quote: Matthew Stott @ August 3 2013, 6:45 PM BSTIt cost nothing, was quick to produce, and the outcome was rather good; so we almost certainly will.
Really liked this - the Paul Daniels bit made me laugh. A comment from Derren Brown is amazing!
Unfortunately, I was sitting in the park watching this. The advert before the video was the NSPCC one with all the kids saying "my penis" "my noo noo". Couldn't get to the mute button before a family sitting near me had moved!
Quote: Matthew Stott @ August 3 2013, 7:11 PM BSTWouldn't less pictures make it less snappy? You'd sit on pictures static longer.
Ok fair point. But maybe for this to work, you need snappier dialogue like a comic book?
Quote: Jennie @ August 3 2013, 7:14 PM BSTReally liked this - the Paul Daniels bit made me laugh. A comment from Derren Brown is amazing!
Unfortunately, I was sitting in the park watching this. The advert before the video was the NSPCC one with all the kids saying "my penis" "my noo noo". Couldn't get to the mute button before a family sitting near me had moved!
Thanks Jennie, and I'm afraid I insist on only embarrassing ads before our vids.
Quote: Lee @ August 3 2013, 7:01 PM BSTCan I just suggest that you make it more snappier, as in use less frames. It wasn't quite professional standard but was close and that will come with practice
I'd say, if anything, have more pictures. I think any less and it would have no flow.
This one felt a bit too knowingly whacky and like it was relying on wild performances rather than clever ideas or scripts.
WHich you Hunka Punkas seem better at.
Quote: Ben @ August 3 2013, 7:19 PM BSTI'd say, if anything, have more pictures. I think any less and it would have no flow.
I actually would have resisted that, for this one it feels about right. Though yes, snappier, shorter sentences would help.
Quote: sootyj @ August 3 2013, 7:21 PM BSTThis one felt a bit too knowingly whacky and like it was relying on wild performances rather than clever ideas or scripts.
WHich you Hunka Punkas seem better at.
Tell that to the guy who left a comment labeling it 'Genius'. Yeah, YOU HEAR THAT? I am a genius.
I was called a genius but then I am a cult leader.
I think I am, people keep calling me a big hairy cult when ever I do standup.
I liked these two, if anyone missed 'em. (Not written by me)
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Quote: Ben @ August 3 2013, 7:19 PM BSTI'd say, if anything, have more pictures.
That's called a video
Funny sketch. What I liked was that your performance is what makes it good.
Quote: sootyj @ August 3 2013, 7:21 PM BSTThis one felt a bit too knowingly whacky and like it was relying on wild performances rather than clever ideas or scripts.
The performances were great though given the medium, and there were some good lines in there.
Graham Linehan just tweeted this (without being asked to) saying how funny it was, and he's no comedy slouch; time for a BUMP: