Critique Page 133

1. Sitcommission entry "Jemma's Dad"

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   Last post by Batleywriter on 18th March 2011 at 5:42pm

2. 4 in to 2 (Sitcom)

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   Last post by Corey O'Graffor on 18th March 2011 at 4:56pm

3. Different type of critique required please

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   Last post by Batleywriter on 18th March 2011 at 4:37pm

4. Dead prostitute sketch

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   Last post by sootyj on 18th March 2011 at 1:12pm

5. Laughing Stock Fail

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   Last post by sean knight on 18th March 2011 at 1:04pm

6. My submission

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   Last post by Batleywriter on 18th March 2011 at 12:18pm

7. New project

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   Last post by sean knight on 18th March 2011 at 12:09pm

8. My characters - What do we think?

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   Last post by ToddB on 18th March 2011 at 5:25am

9. Basic Humour

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   Last post by AngieBaby on 17th March 2011 at 11:12pm

10. NJ: Murdoch Buy-Out

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    Last post by Deferenz on 17th March 2011 at 8:06pm

11. My Sitcom Mission Entry

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    Last post by darius on 17th March 2011 at 6:22pm

12. My Sitcommision failure.

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    Last post by bighead65 on 17th March 2011 at 2:40pm

13. Invitation to try Bob Newhart style.

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    Last post by Jerf Roberwitz on 17th March 2011 at 10:26am

14. Looking for feedback!!

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    Last post by Otterfox on 17th March 2011 at 10:13am

15. Sitcomission - Laze (Middle)

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    Last post by bighead65 on 16th March 2011 at 9:09pm

16. Sitcommission Fail - Spartan

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    Last post by Frantically on 16th March 2011 at 8:24pm

17. Failed Sitcom - Elvis in Wonderland

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    Last post by alabastercodify on 16th March 2011 at 8:10pm

18. Zombie farce

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    Last post by sootyj on 16th March 2011 at 8:00pm

19. My sitcom attempt

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    Last post by sean knight on 16th March 2011 at 1:47pm

20. My submission and first attempt at sitcom writing

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    Last post by Buster Spleen on 16th March 2011 at 10:33am

21. Post Sitcom Mission Rejection Effort

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    Last post by sean knight on 16th March 2011 at 9:20am

22. Some YouTube sketches.

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    Last post by Hosai on 16th March 2011 at 9:07am

23. Sitcomission - Laze (Beginning)

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    Last post by Donny Afternoon on 15th March 2011 at 8:26pm

24. Newsjack Twitter War

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    Last post by Jerf Roberwitz on 15th March 2011 at 6:06pm

25. Nasty!

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    Last post by alabastercodify on 15th March 2011 at 5:38pm

26. Would it make Newsjack?

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    Last post by Jerf Roberwitz on 15th March 2011 at 4:35pm

27. NJ: Hague Denial

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    Last post by swerytd on 15th March 2011 at 9:23am

28. NJ: Nick Clegg - choose your own adventure

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    Last post by Bomsh on 14th March 2011 at 4:46pm

29. NJ: Olympic Cuts

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    Last post by 3songsnoflash on 14th March 2011 at 10:33am

30. Newsjack entry

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    Last post by sean knight on 14th March 2011 at 10:32am

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